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Notice: [MC will be weak towards female characters. It will be a harem but MC will remain faithful to only one.]
Warning: [Some chapters have ruthless scenes, you have been warned.]
'Defeat is when you compare yourself to others, True defeat is when you start to lose heart and will to continue struggling and eventually fall in the endless abyss of despair'
William Pierce, experienced defeat countless times. A defeat that filled his life with misery and regrets. But even so, William did not despair and pushed on to be a mage.
After so many years of struggling, William discovered something remarkably different from the usual magic he knew. Little did he know it will mark a new era, led by the forsaken, who will shake the stagnant world.
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The synopsis was quite interesting but I didn't really feel hooked by it, it seemed more like a fantastical slice of life story ie until I started it and was quite surprised. I don't know why people get upset with the sudden changes in POV. well, that's their business because I love it. Changes in POV help us visualize the story from everyone's perspective instead of us rooting for the MC when we don't exactly agree with all his actions. You were able to execute that with a smooth character design which isn't so easy to do. Keep it up ✨
I don't usually review a book but it's a great book, you should give it a try. For now there are only a few chapters, but I hope the author will continue to write more. Good job! (Sorry if my English is bad but I'm not a native speaker)
Hi! My name is Victoria and you write really well! I would like to inquire if you are interested in trying to work on an interactive novel? Our company is in the beginning stages of rolling out this scripted interactive game worldwide, so if you'd like to work on a new paid creation or would like to do that adaptation of the book, please feel free to get in touch with me!
Am not really a fan of male lead fantasy novel but this one is totally fine and different I love this main character action and the deep knowledge in writing this book keep going on....
First of all, nice opening and the storyline does seems promising and enjoyable to read. What I wanted to point out is that the sudden changes of pov. Other than that, it's all good
This story has its flow and originality. It stands out perfectly in the ML section, I must say. Some paragraphs were too long to read, but I think we all make the same mistake. The pov changes sometimes, but if you know how to read, it shouldn't be a problem. The grammar is flawless too. Your Mc is very likeable, could already see his future character development. Not too cocky and not op, not too smart and lazy, the author did a good job with his MC, commendable. The storyline is original, the fight scenes are nicely written and everything is well explained. I was captivated after chapter 2. Will follow your updates, but please fix your dialogues, it can confuse other readers. 🤧
I love it, thank you for this amazing story . Waiting for the next chapter, hope you update soon and Good luck. Hehehe. [img=update][img=recommend]
Please rate my work it helps me a lot! I'm just being shameless here and rated myself. If this will help attract people to check my work then I'll do it even if it means humiliating myself😂😂
This story isn't bad by any means, but I'm hard pressed to say it is a great story. Really it's just average, and I'm not certain if it will get better over time or if it's just going to get worse. The characters and storyline aren't bad, they just aren't catchy or exceptional enough to make me want to read more. Even the synopsis of the book isn't very convincing. Overall, this book is incredibly average. I don't hate it, but I certainly don't love it either. Hope to see improved future works from the author.
good plot and interesting characters and world background and keep updating new chapters 👍👍👍