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I think it's a good novel, but the author creates some nonsensical dialogues between Ling Yun's wives. I'm on chapter 1162, and the wives' discussion revolves around how to kill him if he succumbs to his demonic side. Being wives and supposedly in love with him, they shouldn't prioritize the lives of other creatures over their husband/master's. Ling Xi herself says she doesn't care about other lives, but she's thinking about killing the protagonist; this dialogue makes no sense. If Ling Yun becomes a demon, what's the problem? These wives are far too weak compared to wives in other cultivation novels who would support their husbands and disregard everyone else.
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Its really annoying that all the MC’s cultivation partners get really strong when bloodline awakens yet MC barely gets stronger. The author keeps using the excuse of “oh you dont want your foundation to be unstable” meanwhile MCs sister gets ice dragon bloodline and shoots up from lower foundation realm to peak foundation realm and then dual cultivates with MC and goes to lower core formation realm. Reason this makes me mad is cause MC gets the literal ancesteral strongest dragon bloodline implanted in him as a mortal yet there is no boost in cultivation. Classic case of author not knowing how to keep female leads strength up to par with MC so they just give them plot bs to boost their cultivation. For MC it doesnt work but aye for the side characters it boosts their shit to another dimension. Also, the amount of dual cultivation MC does yet he is still lower foundation realm is absurd. Btw foundation is merely 4th out of 10 mortal major realms. Not only that but we are 190 chaps in and hes not even halfway through the mortal major realms even given the strongest bloodline, top tier physique, and dual cultivator, these are all things that should give MC crazy fast cultivation speed. Dont get me wrong in real time its only been like 1-1.5 months since he started cuktivating, but authot has the bad habbit of making filler stall actual plot progress. Thats why almost 200 chapters have passed yet it hasnt even been a quarter of a year in the world. I would say the novel is bad, but so far the above observations have made me give it a lower rating. There is barely any fighting and even when there is conflict his guardian xi is there to save the day over and over. Just makes it pointless cause he has an entire system full of cool techniques and manuals yet they are shown off properly at all. Most of the novel focuses on relationships over actual cultivation which hinders it heavily
A evolução começou super top gostei demais dos primeiros capítulos envolvente tudo mais só o nome do protagonista que é um pouco confuso porque ele é muito parecido com o nome da irmã da mãe só tem uma crítica até o momento desde comecei a ler essa obra desnecessário o portal do ministro a ter tirado a virgindade da vampira a força tinha tantas formas de fazer ela se submeter a ele mas o autor fez da pior forma possível e mais tosca essa é minha única crítica até o momento desde quando estou lendo né espero que ele melhore nesse quesito ou que ele use outras formas de se vingar dos seus inimigos que sejam realmente interessantes enfim é isso
author please give me the spoiler can you going to add time lord into his harem ??
I think I might have gotten heart demons from reading this. Fellow daoists please let the poison tester sect warn you out of this one. Nonetheless, if you possess any valuable treasures, submit them to this seat first. Should you return alive, they shall be yours to claim.
Lost a lot of chapters. Last chapter 3086 he was going to the venerable ream. Upgrade, Now I'm seem to be starting over
Leaving a faithful review that might hurt some set of people (clearing throat, "The haters") ; I love this book so much, would have loved to read more but my wallet is growing webs.
I like the novel but it always gives me cringe when they talk about how he needs to get stronger every two chapters, and literally in the time of the two chapters not even an hour has passed in the world. It takes 100 chapters for a day or it also takes another 100 chapters for half a day to pass in the world, no matter how good the physique, lineage, and all that is, for me it is very illogical that it takes a week to surpass at least 80% of cultivators in the whole world, I would say that they should give him more time but it frustrates me a lot that it takes more than a hundred or more chapters for at least two days to pass, but oh well the novel is fine
story is good and I like MC and ling xi the most and relationship with women filled with love and care
At first the writing is pretty trashy but it improves over time... regarding the power levels, it's impressive how the author was inspired by Kakashi when making this work, because all the characters have problems with ki depletion even though they have already reached the realm of the gods at an advanced stage, which should give a large enough reserve of energy to fight for a long time like in any other cultivation novel, Huang guai was just running away from pursuit and was already talking about running out of ki(a cultivator in the kingdom of the gods you should be able to fly for weeks or months at maximum speed) characters use some skills and warn that they may run out of ki. It's just a power issue that really bothered me. Another thing I didn't like is having another protagonist and a character who knows everything that will happen in the future giving spoilers to the 2 protagonists of the novel (this is very stolen and breaks the tension)
Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me
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idea and plot are interesting. But surely need improvement on naration and grammar. well pratice make perfect, i won't critize too much on naration since its part of process. for English and grammar i suggest author to utilize some ai apps like quillbot to rephrase or grammar checking. im sure it can help a lot to improve the quality. keep going!
I made it to chapter 380, but for me I just can't continue. The writing is good, but someone early complained about author using names instead of pronouns, and they obliged. However author should have kept with names as the use of pronouns is wrong about 95% of the time. The MC is ok and is essentially along for the ride as all the girls around him are like that Noob in a MMORPG who accidentally pulls the boss when your trying clear the room every raid/dungeon. The girls bring all the trouble to the MC and so far pretty much the MC is not strong enough to take them on and has to be protected.. But then the women tell him he needs to get stronger (the ones targeting are 3-5 realms!! higher than him). Liang Xi is the worst of the bunch as she always complains about him needing focus on cultivation and getting stronger, but is also the one throwing all these troublesome women at him like she is feeding the birds.. This is on story I actually sympathize with the MC as every one around him just makes his life a CLUSTER $*@)!...He can't cultivate for more than a couple hours as he is either Banging all these women or is in a situation out of his control.. I could continue if the MC would just finally snap at Liang Xi with the cold hard truth from above.. But unfortunately we get "I need to get stronger.", "you need to be serious and get stronger." every other chapter.
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Another great find. The novel wasn’t like another Chinese trashy novel where mc deliberately hides his identity. This mc knows his place. He didn’t hesitate to get help from his powerful harem members. Also the harem isn’t just getting women then forget. Mc values his harem equally. Thank you author for your effort. [img=update]
I have read the first 45 chapters so far so good mc is nice to his woman but not idiotic or childish he is quite smart and wise enough, writing style is pretty good and easy to understand and what i like the most are his harem members so far they are very interesting especially his mom and wingman sister 😍, I'll be waiting for next month to buy the privillege and continue, good job Author
Already wrote about what I love so now i'm going to add what I think can be improved and hopefully the author can take my suggestions into account. 1. Yun says he doesn't want to rely on Ling Xi too much however it's really all he has done so far whether it comes to dealing with every enemy that comes up or something else. 2. I would like to see Yun truly start getting combat experience by fighting other cultivators, however this isn't a huge knock because I really enjoy how the story is realistic as he has just became a cultivator so he clearly should be way behind when it comes to fighting people who grew up in a cultivation family or sect. 3. I would love for the world building to be a bit better and be explained in depth at some point. I can understand wanting to have a layer of mystery which makes the reader more interested and attached to the world building however it is a bit confusing that we know of the cultivation realm where strong cultivators are however there has been mentions of another realm above that where the Mo family fled to however we know nothing about even the cultivator realm yet so it feels a bit odd having something like that thrown in already. Keep up the good work author, just some personal suggestions. PS: I would love if you made a page that has all of the cultivation realms/tiers as it can get confusing which realm is above which
Reveal Spoiler loving this so far. love how the system is implemented with a good shop feature, and a currency system that counts the money he earns on earth and not just some electronic points from dual cultivating only. I also love how he needs to hit a required amount of yin and yang qi in order to break through rather than other cultivation novels that make leveling up and getting stronger confusing. the relationships so far are built on true feelings. please keep up the great work and consistent updates author-kun
i liked your old story alot before this rewrite and was quite confused why but reading this one i like this one alot more than the last one the only reason its a 4.8 is because of the mc's father and all the other retards like them in the story who annoy me that being said the villains and antagonist did their purpose to make the readers dislike them but every one has different opinions so its at 4.8
Do not remember if I leave my review on this novel. well, this is one of my favorite novels and the author is doing a great job with the rewrite, I hope a lot of people support him, because he deserves it. Thank you and keep writing
great novel before but even better with the rewrite. the novel has everything you need to keep you entertained and enjoy reading it. the rewrite has added more character growth and communication between him and women over the previous version. keep up the great work brother on this. the original was what turned me on to your works. thanks so much for the hard effort you put in to your writing. looking forward to more.
I know the author wants to add depth to the story, but the idea of the protagonist bringing Long Hun back is terrible. More than half of his harem was acquired with the title of successor to the Dragon of Chaos, including the dragon's follower beasts, and then the author invented that the protagonist wants to bring Long Hun back? Is he going to put netorari in the novel? There's no way there can be two tigers on one mountain.
I think it's a good novel, but the author creates some nonsensical dialogues between Ling Yun's wives. I'm on chapter 1162, and the wives' discussion revolves around how to kill him if he succumbs to his demonic side. Being wives and supposedly in love with him, they shouldn't prioritize the lives of other creatures over their husband/master's. Ling Xi herself says she doesn't care about other lives, but she's thinking about killing the protagonist; this dialogue makes no sense. If Ling Yun becomes a demon, what's the problem? These wives are far too weak compared to wives in other cultivation novels who would support their husbands and disregard everyone else.
Reveal Spoiler Its really annoying that all the MC’s cultivation partners get really strong when bloodline awakens yet MC barely gets stronger. The author keeps using the excuse of “oh you dont want your foundation to be unstable” meanwhile MCs sister gets ice dragon bloodline and shoots up from lower foundation realm to peak foundation realm and then dual cultivates with MC and goes to lower core formation realm. Reason this makes me mad is cause MC gets the literal ancesteral strongest dragon bloodline implanted in him as a mortal yet there is no boost in cultivation. Classic case of author not knowing how to keep female leads strength up to par with MC so they just give them plot bs to boost their cultivation. For MC it doesnt work but aye for the side characters it boosts their shit to another dimension. Also, the amount of dual cultivation MC does yet he is still lower foundation realm is absurd. Btw foundation is merely 4th out of 10 mortal major realms. Not only that but we are 190 chaps in and hes not even halfway through the mortal major realms even given the strongest bloodline, top tier physique, and dual cultivator, these are all things that should give MC crazy fast cultivation speed. Dont get me wrong in real time its only been like 1-1.5 months since he started cuktivating, but authot has the bad habbit of making filler stall actual plot progress. Thats why almost 200 chapters have passed yet it hasnt even been a quarter of a year in the world. I would say the novel is bad, but so far the above observations have made me give it a lower rating. There is barely any fighting and even when there is conflict his guardian xi is there to save the day over and over. Just makes it pointless cause he has an entire system full of cool techniques and manuals yet they are shown off properly at all. Most of the novel focuses on relationships over actual cultivation which hinders it heavily
A evolução começou super top gostei demais dos primeiros capítulos envolvente tudo mais só o nome do protagonista que é um pouco confuso porque ele é muito parecido com o nome da irmã da mãe só tem uma crítica até o momento desde comecei a ler essa obra desnecessário o portal do ministro a ter tirado a virgindade da vampira a força tinha tantas formas de fazer ela se submeter a ele mas o autor fez da pior forma possível e mais tosca essa é minha única crítica até o momento desde quando estou lendo né espero que ele melhore nesse quesito ou que ele use outras formas de se vingar dos seus inimigos que sejam realmente interessantes enfim é isso
author please give me the spoiler can you going to add time lord into his harem ??
I think I might have gotten heart demons from reading this. Fellow daoists please let the poison tester sect warn you out of this one. Nonetheless, if you possess any valuable treasures, submit them to this seat first. Should you return alive, they shall be yours to claim.
Lost a lot of chapters. Last chapter 3086 he was going to the venerable ream. Upgrade, Now I'm seem to be starting over
Leaving a faithful review that might hurt some set of people (clearing throat, "The haters") ; I love this book so much, would have loved to read more but my wallet is growing webs.
I like the novel but it always gives me cringe when they talk about how he needs to get stronger every two chapters, and literally in the time of the two chapters not even an hour has passed in the world. It takes 100 chapters for a day or it also takes another 100 chapters for half a day to pass in the world, no matter how good the physique, lineage, and all that is, for me it is very illogical that it takes a week to surpass at least 80% of cultivators in the whole world, I would say that they should give him more time but it frustrates me a lot that it takes more than a hundred or more chapters for at least two days to pass, but oh well the novel is fine
story is good and I like MC and ling xi the most and relationship with women filled with love and care
At first the writing is pretty trashy but it improves over time... regarding the power levels, it's impressive how the author was inspired by Kakashi when making this work, because all the characters have problems with ki depletion even though they have already reached the realm of the gods at an advanced stage, which should give a large enough reserve of energy to fight for a long time like in any other cultivation novel, Huang guai was just running away from pursuit and was already talking about running out of ki(a cultivator in the kingdom of the gods you should be able to fly for weeks or months at maximum speed) characters use some skills and warn that they may run out of ki. It's just a power issue that really bothered me. Another thing I didn't like is having another protagonist and a character who knows everything that will happen in the future giving spoilers to the 2 protagonists of the novel (this is very stolen and breaks the tension)
Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me
Xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx
Reveal Spoiler idea and plot are interesting. But surely need improvement on naration and grammar. well pratice make perfect, i won't critize too much on naration since its part of process. for English and grammar i suggest author to utilize some ai apps like quillbot to rephrase or grammar checking. im sure it can help a lot to improve the quality. keep going!
I made it to chapter 380, but for me I just can't continue. The writing is good, but someone early complained about author using names instead of pronouns, and they obliged. However author should have kept with names as the use of pronouns is wrong about 95% of the time. The MC is ok and is essentially along for the ride as all the girls around him are like that Noob in a MMORPG who accidentally pulls the boss when your trying clear the room every raid/dungeon. The girls bring all the trouble to the MC and so far pretty much the MC is not strong enough to take them on and has to be protected.. But then the women tell him he needs to get stronger (the ones targeting are 3-5 realms!! higher than him). Liang Xi is the worst of the bunch as she always complains about him needing focus on cultivation and getting stronger, but is also the one throwing all these troublesome women at him like she is feeding the birds.. This is on story I actually sympathize with the MC as every one around him just makes his life a CLUSTER $*@)!...He can't cultivate for more than a couple hours as he is either Banging all these women or is in a situation out of his control.. I could continue if the MC would just finally snap at Liang Xi with the cold hard truth from above.. But unfortunately we get "I need to get stronger.", "you need to be serious and get stronger." every other chapter.
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Another great find. The novel wasn’t like another Chinese trashy novel where mc deliberately hides his identity. This mc knows his place. He didn’t hesitate to get help from his powerful harem members. Also the harem isn’t just getting women then forget. Mc values his harem equally. Thank you author for your effort. [img=update]
I have read the first 45 chapters so far so good mc is nice to his woman but not idiotic or childish he is quite smart and wise enough, writing style is pretty good and easy to understand and what i like the most are his harem members so far they are very interesting especially his mom and wingman sister 😍, I'll be waiting for next month to buy the privillege and continue, good job Author
Already wrote about what I love so now i'm going to add what I think can be improved and hopefully the author can take my suggestions into account. 1. Yun says he doesn't want to rely on Ling Xi too much however it's really all he has done so far whether it comes to dealing with every enemy that comes up or something else. 2. I would like to see Yun truly start getting combat experience by fighting other cultivators, however this isn't a huge knock because I really enjoy how the story is realistic as he has just became a cultivator so he clearly should be way behind when it comes to fighting people who grew up in a cultivation family or sect. 3. I would love for the world building to be a bit better and be explained in depth at some point. I can understand wanting to have a layer of mystery which makes the reader more interested and attached to the world building however it is a bit confusing that we know of the cultivation realm where strong cultivators are however there has been mentions of another realm above that where the Mo family fled to however we know nothing about even the cultivator realm yet so it feels a bit odd having something like that thrown in already. Keep up the good work author, just some personal suggestions. PS: I would love if you made a page that has all of the cultivation realms/tiers as it can get confusing which realm is above which
Reveal Spoiler loving this so far. love how the system is implemented with a good shop feature, and a currency system that counts the money he earns on earth and not just some electronic points from dual cultivating only. I also love how he needs to hit a required amount of yin and yang qi in order to break through rather than other cultivation novels that make leveling up and getting stronger confusing. the relationships so far are built on true feelings. please keep up the great work and consistent updates author-kun
i liked your old story alot before this rewrite and was quite confused why but reading this one i like this one alot more than the last one the only reason its a 4.8 is because of the mc's father and all the other retards like them in the story who annoy me that being said the villains and antagonist did their purpose to make the readers dislike them but every one has different opinions so its at 4.8
Do not remember if I leave my review on this novel. well, this is one of my favorite novels and the author is doing a great job with the rewrite, I hope a lot of people support him, because he deserves it. Thank you and keep writing
great novel before but even better with the rewrite. the novel has everything you need to keep you entertained and enjoy reading it. the rewrite has added more character growth and communication between him and women over the previous version. keep up the great work brother on this. the original was what turned me on to your works. thanks so much for the hard effort you put in to your writing. looking forward to more.
I know the author wants to add depth to the story, but the idea of the protagonist bringing Long Hun back is terrible. More than half of his harem was acquired with the title of successor to the Dragon of Chaos, including the dragon's follower beasts, and then the author invented that the protagonist wants to bring Long Hun back? Is he going to put netorari in the novel? There's no way there can be two tigers on one mountain.