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[Solo Leveling Fanfic (AU) - Rewrite Version]
A wise man once said that every decision or choice we make leads to new possible futures.
That would infer a possibility of a world where the Earth was destroyed or a world where robots exterminated humanity.
Thus creating parallel worlds...
Then what would happen if an ordinary person from Earth reincarnates into one of these parallel worlds and not just any world...
A world where people with supernatural power exist.
A world where Monarchs and Rulers treat the Earth merely as a battlefield.
A world where two Monarchs instead of one stayed loyal to the end to protect their god, the Absolute Being.
And those two Monarchs were called the Shadow Monarch and... the Thunder Monarch.
Note: The story progression will be a bit slow-paced so if you don't like this kind of thing then I suggest you avoid it. And there will be some difference between the original Solo leveling and this fanfic, just reminding everyone.
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I like where this is going. the book has a lot of potential and it does not have harem which is a plus from me. Please don't drop it
Read up to chapter 6, feels fantastic to look over, no real grammar issue. This is quite an interesting saga. I hope you don't end up dropping it.
Read as of chapter 11. It’s alright but kind of boring. The MC is also not the brightest. Makes Rash decisions an is a bland character.
Shameless Author here~ I'm just warning the readers who are about to read this. This fanfic takes place in a parallel world so there would naturally be some differences compared to the original. I'm just reminding everyone in case you feel confused if you find something out of ordinary.
Good story. Finally solo leveling story without harem............................[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The only thing I can say for new readers is don't read it yet, when author says slow pace he truly means it. The same event has been going on for like 9 chapters. This isn't inherently bad but for those impatient like me I seriously suggest waiting until there's like 50-100 chapters before trying to judge if you're gonna keep reading this novel.
u overcompensated in this rewrite based off that review. 4 lengthy chapters in and he should have awakened at the end of the whole ggoblin incident coz u can show ur main character isn't weak willed after like the first or 2nd goblin goes down everything after that is unnecessary and adds nothing to the story. u also have a tendency to overwrite things for example :'mc takes a object out of his right pocket, it's his phone he looks to see what the alert on it is and it's a text message ' etc I paraphrased slight but there is a bunch of trimming to be done there that action took almost a paragraph to explain what could be done in a sentence or two for example :'mc takes his phone out of his breast pocket and sees it's a text ' anyway still early on in the rewrite all i can do is hope u see this and continue to improve.
Didn't read yet but looks promising from the title and sypnosis. But plz keep the romance minimum and plz don't find drop this.
Hope that you continue cause it's a good story so far and you seem to be a good author judging by your one piece story
There’s a lacking number of critical reviews for this novel. Therefore, I decided to write about the plot, what I liked, and what I didn’t. However, to save time for those that don’t want to read everything, I didn’t enjoy this novel. The main character is as arrogant as Chinese protagonists, and as weak-minded as those characters who are failures before receiving their systems. Novel’s Plot: The novel’s plot revolves around a clan member of the Ryuji clan. The clan that Goto Ryuji, the Japanese S-Rank hunter, belongs to. On a day like any other, goblins flood out of an unnoticed gate, causing death and chaos. Coincidentally, the protagonist is amidst the panicking civilians running from the scene, only to look back at a goblin chasing him and trip, twisting his ankle. Following a unnecessary existential crisis and a cry for life, his system awakens, granting him magical powers of thunder, allowing him to eliminate the goblin. Things I liked: I liked the concept of the novel, where it was introduced that the rulers had constantly failed to save humanity with a device that allowed them to reverse time. On their last attempt, an error occurred unnoticed by the rulers, causing the protagonist to gain his system. Things I disliked: There’s a lot to dislike about the novel. Quite frankly, the protagonist is the weakest link of the story. Generalizing the flaws, it turns out as this: - Chinese Protagonist Mentality - Arrogant - Randomly instigating his “evil” brother with no power to back him up - Confidence about how potential, which he hasn’t attain yet - Weak-minded - Upon threats from his brother, immediately folds and joins his brother’s guild - Lacking intelligence - Behavior leaves much to be desired - Making assumptions about his system every 5 minutes - At one point, somehow determined that his system inventory can’t store conscious beings and has time-stop capabilities within a few seconds with no testing - Doesn’t act like his background suggests - Supposedly was trained in the sword, yet fell over and twisted his ankle in front of a goblin - Constantly talks about his “trained body,” yet the above still happened - His clan is supposedly famous and admired, yet the protagonist seems like a common foolish individual. - Makes attempts to be humble and treat servants like peers when the clan is first introduced, but makes no sense considering he’s been in the clan for at least a decade - Rather, he looks naive and ignorant of the world Overall, I did not enjoy the novel. It is hard to like the protagonist when he acts all arrogant and so sure of himself. Perhaps, the author didn’t intend to make the protagonist seem like this, but that was how I read it. This points towards a necessary improvement in writing skills. Pointing out the limitations of this review, I did not read past the first dozen chapters. There could be some magical change in the personality in the future chapters. Another limitation is my bias against the protagonist once I realized his arrogance. The story could actually be pretty decent, ignoring the protagonist.