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When I opened my eyes, all I could hear and feel was the sound the waves were making, and my back getting hotter because of the sand.
I tried to reach for something, but only emptiness greeted me. And unbeknownst, I started crying as if this emptiness was killing me from the inside.
What happened?
Why do I feel like this?
Why does my head hurt so much?
'You'll discover everything at the end of this road, Yugi...'
And so begin, the journey, of this lost soul.
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Is it Chapter 1 or a Prologue (it reads more like a prologue)? While the prologue serves as an exposition dump, it is done in an interesting enough way that the reader doesn't feel put off by an excess of information. However, the exposition and world building are too muddled to really make heads or tails of, so it reads like a bit of a mess. If it were clearer, my rating would improve, but perhaps the prophetic- and prophecy-like tone is intentional, it's difficult to say without more chapters.
For those who knows me already, I'm just writing this when I have time to rest my mind to think of something other than school. So it's normal if MAS still hasn't re-started again...