Aranama

LV 3

PandaDumpling

I like the character. He's very interesting. This story has great potential if one overlooks the repeated grammatical errors. Also, I would advice you to publish chapters with lesser breaks between them. Looking forward to the story! Keep it up!

LV 1

PicatrixPuff

This story has great potential and gives me a strong sensation of adventure. Please keep up with the good work! I see a big potential in your story!

I see potential in it, keep it up! The only advice I can give is that other characters tell their stories, not just the main character. Anyway, it seems interesting to me, and even if I see it correctly, it's more about the fight scenes, which if I see it correctly, is also described in the Synopsis, so I think you started the story very well

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Hello, dear author! I've read your novel and it's really great. We are a SWAP HONEST REVIEW AND COLLECTION for Webnovel. You can search for webnovel666 on DISCORD or @webnovel666 on Telegram to join our community This novel is truly captivating! It is full of surprises, action and adventure, making it a thrilling read from start to finish. I especially appreciate the complexity of the plot and all the unexpected plot twists and turns. It would be great if there were more moments throughout the story for the characters to pause and reflect on the events, as this would give readers a chance to further engage with their development.