Avvenvita

Finally, it's back with a new face HAHAHAHA I already forgot how many iterations this story has, I do hope that this will be final! The world-building is a chef's kiss, to be honest even way back in the first version, but I do like the new iterations because every time it comes back everything is better. I like that it still has the same style of writing, it's very traditional compared to the mainstream genres and style. It feels like a good break from all these system-based stories. I like how the book gave us an introduction to the place where our protagonist will start his journey. It gives me the feeling that the story will have a lot to offer. It gives a sense of security that there is more ahead of us to expect, There is a new world for us to unravel and know. And for that alone, I'll give it a 5 star for world-building. I love stories that have lores and histories the most! I like how he's shrouded in mystery and will be likened to an orange that we had to peel to see or eat what is inside. For the other character that already appeared, I'll say that they had personalities of their own, (Spoilers ahead I think?) Yul is quite chic and cool but a people-loving individual, Ojhin? he's an individual who has a sense of patriotism in him and will run his mouth if it's about his country. As for Master Yoo, your cliche nerve-wracking, and annoying master. As for Yeji, A tsundere is as simple as that. Also for the commander or something or king, I forgot, I think he's someone prideful, but his sense of pride encompasses his country and his people so he's very inclined to listen to their ideas, but he's very boastful and conceited that he might get his people killed😭 luckily he has his people to give him some slack. As for other characters, I don't have deep impressions of them yet. So for now a 5-star characterization for this greatly fleshed-out character! (They had personalities OmO) The writing is a chef's kiss, easily understandable but I think some of the words used are too deep and also quite unnecessary, it defeats the feeling but it's only for my preference, others might like it!! Story development, I'll stay quiet about this for now, but I'm really expecting a lot!!! So 5 stars for my wish! Updating stability, No comment for now because it's still early! But please do update weekly even if you couldn't do it daily. 5 stars for my support😛. A piece of advice to the author, you're already doing a nice job, I could say that the stories you produce are above the standards. You just need more perseverance, focus, and confidence, and maybe tone down your perfectionist side a little bit. Reading a story with an ending is far better than bits and pieces, you authors won't suffer but as readers, we suffer when authors stop updating! That's all I'll stop with being dramatic.