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Chapter 4: 4 Fast Food Restaurant and Analysis

These Chapters from now one will be from the MC POV unless I change It I will let you all know when reading the book.

Thank you for reading my novel I hope you are joining it as I hopefully get better and better after writing each chapter more and more.

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(MC POV)

The next day arrived as I woke up. "I almost forgot I was in a new world luckily it was not a dream" I said to my self before I got up for the day.

[Ding]

[Achievement Unlocked 'Survive the First Night']

[Rewards: Whole McDonalds Menu, 10,000, 500 System points, +5 all stats]

'Wow how come I got the McDonalds menu for surviving a night?'

[Master whenever you complete an achievement it goes to helping your current goal unless you dont have one at that time so it took other rewards and replaced it with what you need at that time just to make sure you are able to live a more care free life than you were before.]

'Oh alright that makes sense I guess welp system show me my status'

[Stats]

Name: Colt Pitman

Lovers: 0 (Absolute Loner)

Relationships: Ruby Pitman (Little Sister) Jade Pitman (Mother)

Money:700,000 (+10000)

System Points:1,300 (+500)

Age: 18

STR: 10 (+5)

STA: 12 (+5)

INT: 10 (+5)

CHA: 8 (+5)

Charm: 4

Luck: 6

[Professions]

Business Knowledge: Level 10 (Max Level 40)

Cooking Knowledge: Level 10 (Max Level 40)

"Alright time to get going for the day" I said excitedly as I rushed out the door.

"Bye Mom, Bye Princess have a good day today" I said before leaving the house before they could respond.

As I didnt have a car yet I had to run all the way to the downtown area to look at my shop but before I did I almost forgot of one important thing I need employees.

Luckily in this world there are guilds for that so instead of going towards the restaurant I went straight for the Business Guild to look for a good manager to do all the work for me to be honest since I am to lazy to do the work myself.

As I was heading towards the Business guild I was waiting to cross the walkway and when it turned green to walk I was about to start walking but then I remembered the last time I thought I was safe and checked both ways making sure the cost was clear and luckily I did because the next moment I saw and out of control car not able to stop.

'Thank god I looked both ways' I thought but before I could celebrate this small victory I looked to see if anyone was walking and right then I saw someone in the middle of the street that looked no older than 21 I quickly ran into the street to try and save the girl and luckily I did by pushing us both down onto the a little bit away from the car right before it hit both of us we landed hard on the concrete but she definitely took the brute of the fall as I landed on top of her.

As I was getting up all I heard was "Ouch" the girl said as she got up but when she turned around I was stunned she was simply gorgeous with her long grey-ish hair and beautiful body that was nice and slim I was at a lost for words and did not know what to say to her.

[Ding!]

[Achievements Unlocked 'Look Both Ways' & 'Save a Life']

'Two achievements at once!' I exclaimed

[Rewards: 'Analysis', 1,000,000, 5,000 System Points, One Apartment work 3k a month]

While I was lost in thought the girl spoke saying "Thank you for saving my life but you could have been less rough with me" she said embarrassed. "I'm sorry for how I shoved you away and most likely hurt you but I just couldnt see such a beautiful girl die while I could do something to save you." her cheeks turned crimson red as she said "N-No its alright I am grateful you saved me otherwise I most likely not be alive any more so thank you so much."

As she started bowing as a sign of gratitude I quickly stopped "Please stop bowing it makes me embarrassed anyways my name is Colt and yours is.." I said and she quickly answered "M-y My name is Clara it is nice to meet you Colt." she said with a smile extending a hand forward looking for me to shake it.

'Alexa use analysis on her'

[Stats]

Clara Frisken

Age: 21

Trust: 70

Affection: 15

[Professions]

Business Knowledge: Level 25 (Potential)

My eyes widened in suprise

'25?!?!?!?!'

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Chapters from here on out will be long I promise I just wanted to get the last one out before I went to bed but tomorrow I will start making chapters longer and more entertaining for you all <3


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