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Hero System: Mage's Survival in a Cultivation World
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No good deed goes unpunished.
"A foreign force is kidnapping people to another world."
"Seven of your hero comrades already fell, returning as mere empty shells."
"Your memory will be wiped to keep you safe from them."
"And you...will reincarnate to a new identity, and face them once again."
No good deed goes unpunished. And Theo's great need for excitement made him the right choice for this suicide mission!
But why is his system taking so damn long to install? Why did he reincarnate into someone that died from bullying? And why is his system about magic... in a world where practicing magic is forbidden.
And...leads to a cushy spot on a burning stake?
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The author has great command of grammar and makes the story flow easily. The plot, characters, and world building are outstanding. I am intrigued by what will happen next. I can see great things coming for this book. I will read it through to the end. Thank you Author-Nim for a wonderful read.
This ongoing WebNovel is a must-read for anyone who loves a good story. The author's writing style is so engaging and the world they've created is so immersive that I'm constantly captivated by the story. The characters are so well-developed that I feel like I know them personally, and the ongoing nature of the story only adds to the excitement and anticipation. I highly recommend this WebNovel!
From the start it feels like Theo the Mc has no actual free will. He's a train just following the boring track, and if he deviates or doesn't know what to do. BAM! System can take complete control of his actions and speech getting him into and out of situations. It leaves a bad taste in my mouth thinking that in any detrimental situation, all the mcs issues can be fixed through autopilot mode.
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Worst novel no backgrounds given like do not know cultivation ranks , sect or city name , story is too confusing
It's a very interesting tale much worth the time. Though there are very few chapters yet, I ended up reading them all in a single sitting. The writing quality is high and simple and the story seems to be developing interestingly. I enjoyed seeing Theo's character and his use of his wits in his situation. It's an interesting book with very fluid and concise system mechanics. Hoping to see more! Kudos, keep going Author!
This novel is so well written. The author's work is of high quality and practically flawless, and the updates are consistent. The story develops at a slow but steady pace, making it enjoyable. The characters are well-designed and described. The world is well explained in detail. All in all, this is an excellent start to a very interesting novel Keep up the outstanding work!
The title is awesome enough to catch the eye and most sloths on this platform are amazing~. Looks good!!! Let's see how things go~!!
The story starts with a BAM! The MC Theo is certainly one with his own character. In my opinion he's fearless. The author does a good job in writing and world-building. Everything is described well without feeling messy. Hope this book will get more recognition! All the best author!
The writing style is smooth and easy to follow, Theo is such a relatable character. I personally like the pacing of the story, and the world building is top notch. If you're not reading this go read it now
I definitely would recommend this book. I’m in love with the characters and the way the author is able to bring them to life. The worldbuilding sucks you in from the first chapter, leaving you at the edge of your seat with each chapter. The writing is balanced between tone, description, scenery. It all melts together in an eye catching tale. Do yourself a favor and dive in. No regret whatsoever
First review! I've read it already, so I will post the review here! The story is interesting. The world building, the characters, and almost anything in this story hook me up. How the author write every character really show their personality well. They have personalities and all of that which can be found in real people, and I like it. You should give this story a try, 5 out of 5
Better than most, this story blends cultivation and some modern health and fitness on top of intriguing character (main and side) development. The author’s pacing and wry commentary keep me coming back for more.
Hello everyone, author here! Since I don't want to put empty praises in the review, I will use this space to share some more technical info that you all might be interested in. Genre of the story: Dark Fantasy Genre of the story background/lore: Grim Cultivation Characteristics of the Protagonist: A clever guy who uses everything he has at his disposal to overcome the pretty bad odds he was served. Now, a bit more about the story itself: This is my attempt at writing an actually "realistic" cultivation story that's not even focused on cultivation. The aspect of cultivation is just the background, the reality of the world where most of the story will take place, not its main focus. So, don't expect people splitting mountains with a single strike or going against the heavens. You can expect quite a bit of politics, the dark sides of human nature or brutal reality filling every nook and cranny of the world you are about to dive into. Technical aspects and FaQ: - Release rate: 2/day + occasional mass releases - Will this novel be premium? - Yeah. There will be about 50-60 free chapters first, though - Will there be hare and m? (WN censo and r disallows using it in a single word): Yes and no. There won't be a singular Female Lead that will reign supreme throughout the entire story, but MC isn't going to get a garden full of beaches (intentional mistake) either - Will there be lemons? (honestly, no idea how else to call it to avoid the cnsrship)? - Most likely... but I plan to save it for quite a bit later into the story. I'm fed up with using booba as the selling point of the novel so I'm going to give the romance proper time to develop. - Will there be romance? - Yeah, duh, it's Sloth novel, let me project my wishful thinking a bit, would ya? - Will there be brutal scenes? - Yeah. Quite a lot and quite soon. This isn't going to be the smiles and candy-type of a story where everything goes MC's way. All in all, if you have any questions, feel free to post them in a reply to this review and I will do my best to reply!