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Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Prelude to Disaster

12 years ago a nine tailed fox Suddenly appeared It's tails lashed out Smashing mountains and Sending tidal waves Crashing to the shores, The ninja rose up to defend their villages

"Hold the attack and wait for fourth hokage"said a Random ninja Before jumping forward

"it's getting closer don't let it near the village"said another ninja Nearby

(A little earlier)

In a small room there's a woman with Scarlet red hair laying on a table, Beside her A blonde hair man with a white cloak that had red flames on the bottom and strange symbols on the back with some midwives Surrounding her

"Come on Mrs.Uzumaki you got this just a little more "said One of the midwives

The woman on the table begin to push and moments later a Wailing sound could be heard in the room the blonde man Began making preparations. But before he could do anything, he was interrupted by the arrival of a mask man he killed two of the three Anbu guards Hidden in the room and the midwife's and took the newborn baby as a hostage, and started threatening to kill him if The blonde haired man didn't get away from the woman. The blonde man disappeared in a flash, and was holding the newborn baby. He realize there was some paper With writing on the baby and vanished from the room, allowing the mysterious mask man to approach the woman, but before he could reach her the third anbu Guard got in his way, Seconds later the blonde man appeared out of nowhere again and saw a guard dying protecting the Scarlet haired woman Seeing this the blonde man Went to grab the shoulder of the mask man, And teleport away and as he connected he heard a soft voice

"So…rr..y kit..su..na" from the anbu as his last words

But Before teleporting away, his hand goes through the mask man shoulder And teleports without him he curses and teleports back but there's no one in the room he curse again and disappears.

In the nearby, Forest you can see a yellow flash of light going in many different directions before disappearing Deep within the Woods in a nearby clearing the mysterious Maskman, who is now carrying a woman which was now unconscious put her down and pulled out a kunai and aims it to her throat before he can do anything he jumps back and sees a sai With paper wrapped around the handle with writing on, it, hit the ground where he used to be in the blonde man appear is where it landed.

*Roar*

Before their confrontation began A massive amount of red energy was released from the woman and appeared a large nine tailed fox, which looked down. At them when it met the eyes with the mask man it's eyes begin change to a blood red eye with three Tomoe's

*ROAR!!*

With a roar that sent shock waves uprooting trees it then began running in the direction of the village, but before the blonde man could do anything he was taken away by the masked man To A distant location.


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SugerSaga SugerSaga

Hello I just made my first Chapter I hope you don’t go too hard on me for this Would appreciate some input and Advice into improving I Hope you enjoy the first chapter and make sure to point out any potholes and I’ll fix them. Thank you and enjoy.

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