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[ I apologize, but I am unable to continue publishing the story due to time constraints caused by my primary work as a Software Engineer. Therefore, I have made the decision to discontinue the story. ]
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Write a reviewI read the first few chapters, it was good but I felt like something is missing. I can't pinpoint it but maybe the sentence structure was not in flow, you used nice wording, still there was a lot of mistakes using 'verb' in different areas. Use free Version of gammarly it will help u a little. Also keep it up, Nice work Good Luck for the future as well.
As a fantasy reader, I loved this story, pacing is good neither slow nor fast just perfect. World building till this point is awesome. Engaging story plot not a moment leaves you bored. More I need more
Author BongoHead
After reviewing my work, I realized that the chapters were excessively long and became monotonous to read. To address this, I have made significant revisions by cutting them down into shorter, more engaging chapters (from 2800-3500 words to 1000-1500 words). I apologize for any inconvenience caused and appreciate your understanding.