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"The beauty of the apocalypse is what happens afterwards".
In a game-like world of dungeons, monsters and players.
In that world, humanity had faced the apocalypse and survived.
'The reward for your victory will be the closing of the portals and the uninstalling of the System'.
But humanity had other plans and began to use the portals to invade other dimensions.
Do you think a good deed cancels out a bad one?"
Daniel drew his sword from Noah's chest.
"After all, what does it matter if there is no one left to judge us?" He crouched down and stared into his eyes. There was no trace of remorse. "By now the gods are dead."
Betrayed by his comrades, Noah received his reward.
His soul transmigrated into the body of a beastman of a world invaded by humans, now a slave employed in the mines of mana crystals.
Will he make his way to freedom or will darkness and the desire for revenge swallow up his soul and his destiny?
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There are a few minor typos, such as "Mijolnir" instead of "Mjolnir" and "their" instead of "them" in the sentence "They had betrayed them, all of their." In some cases, words that should be capitalized are written in lowercase. For instance, "system" and "portals" should be capitalized since they refer to specific entities within the context of the story. There are a few more minor mistakes that can be easily corrected. Overall, the writing is engaging and well-crafted, and these small adjustments will help improve its clarity and coherence.
First of the idea of the book is quite interesting. I love how you described the whole plot. The characters are also well built. The only drawback is some typos here and there and some grammatical mistakes. Overall it's quite good. I would advise you to read the whole chapter before posting.