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Leonardo Marcia, a 30-year-old footballer from Verona, Italy, experienced a devastating injury 15 years ago, causing him to be released from La Masia, FC Barcelona's youth program. Despite multiple trials, he was rejected by most teams, leaving him no longer a promising prospect. In spite of being fat overtime, Marcia still adores playing football with children in the park and died whiles playing with them. He regrets squandering his talent and never reaching his full potential as a professional athlete.
In a new world after he transmigrated, he received a Blue Lock invitation. The real story begins on from there.
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Literally the best blue lock qu. and I have had the pleasure of reading and above the update of the chapters is frequent, so honestly the only thing I can ask author is that please do not leave this fic🗿👍
I just came across this and let me say it’s one of the best blue lock fanfic or novel there is out there, for me at least, though I don’t know many of them, the protagonist has a clear goal, stated in the first chapters and is slowly (not so much) working towards it, -I just wish we could have a more slow pace- but it’s a good read.
A genuine Blue Lock novel. Keep updating brother, your story is really really good. Looking forward to how the story folds.
Good story development, as well as a striking main character. So far I like the story. Hopefully the author will put more details on the main character, such as appearance and highlighting his strengths
The writing is rough but could be improved. The MC's personality is inconsistent. Plot should be planned more properly. Author should focus more into the chapter's quality rather than its quantity.
~Warning ⚠️ This is my first time making a review.~(currently at ch 23 >Writing quality It is not good, but it is not bad, there are some inconsistencies in some of the sentences but it is bearable👍. >Updating stability It is great 😁the author posts every day so there is nothing to complain about. >Story development It was okay in the beginning but after the first selection, the MC turned into Isagi with a system with the same losses, and everything. >Character design The character is good 👍 the author includes their personality to life in some chapters 👌. >World background The background is okay we know almost nothing about Mc’s life but this might change in the future. >Overall The story has potential if the author edits his chapters and diverges from the plot and stops making the mc Isagi the story will be great. ( I am by no means a professional and am just commenting from personal experience )
this has potential. i just hope that the author takes his time with the story and not rush things… but it is great so far!
this is book is amazing i like the pacing and the back story the system is being executed wonderfully
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I love this book,it's well written and doesn't make the reader get tired of it too early,it's the right balance of exciting and plain and that's what I like about it,the MC is op which is one of my favorite things :)
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Its the best blue lock fanfic ever please don't quit and continue ithas Great world background and story development and Great character design and Great updating stability and translation quality so its a 5 star for me
The last chapter (43) is really good author, please make more chapter not as good as this is acceptable make a decent one every chapter is good enough
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Your writing is weird. You write in first perspective in a third person format. Your writing is more suitable to be in third person format with the occasion first person perspective. First person perspective doesnt work unless you use more dialogue and add more personality to your main character and side characters. And your progression rate is terrible. Sometimes you don’t stay long enough in a certain scene such as the the tag game and sometimes you take too long such as MC daily life. You could simplify a lot of content and expand on more important event or even simple interactions. For example, during the tag game. You could’ve added more depth and even Barous perspective. Secondly, the way you describe the in the game in the begiing chapter, doesn’ make him on the level of nagi who can play around with his opponents like you made mc do. You should’ve expanded more on his play style in the first two chapter, if you wanted to give that impression. Anyways. I’m dropping. It gives me the same feeling I feel when I read AI generated books.
The way the author explores different aspects of the characters' lives is incredibly immersive, and I find myself deeply invested in their journey in blue lock. The attention to detail and the consistent storytelling keep me hooked, making it hard to put down. It's a rollercoaster of emotions, and I just can't get enough of it! Kudos to the talented author for creating such an amazing fanfic.
Can’t wait for more this is awesome 👏 Give it a try if u have watched blue lock
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it's perfect( that's all I have to say) p.s plz don't make it a harem fic, I know the story is about football, but nowadays harem is all over the place😢😥