Emiya Shirou, Those Years In Honkai

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Argent_Evergarden1

HONEST REVIEW! As someone who knows nothing about Honkai I came here mainly for the shirou aspect. However I was presently surprised that there is great character development in shirou. Going from a amnesiac to adopting the “Hero of justice” dream to transmigrating to the body of another him to slowly but surely becoming a person by becoming a “Mother”. I read 16 chapters and skimmed through the next 20 and I can say while the first 16 seems like a summery for Elysia’s growth it changes to an actual story. My biggest problem was she didn’t even have a name for about 14 chapters and it felt Too Slow Paced. Overall if your a Honkai fan this might be your cup of tea But as someone who is not knowledgeable I cannot deeply enjoy this story but I will give it a good review because I do think some people would love this.

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TiredBruh

I deleted my previous review as I realized I set my goals way too high, I mean uploading 10 chapters per day was easier in the beginning because they only had 1000-2000 words, but in the later chapters with 3000 words it takes me so much longer. I'll still translate chapters but not as quickly as I did before. Ok, my thoughts on this story are that it's pretty good compared to other Chinese stories.

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Null_Null

As the translator said this is a good Chinese fanfic. The first few chapters really shows the MC's mentality and how it changes through out the story. If you're looking for an instant "chad" mc then this is not for you as characters actually have emotional ups and downs. They're not characters that stay the same throughout the entire story unlike most webnovel fanfic these days where the author self-inserts themselves into the story.The world background is also great as things gets built up in a smooth paste, well it's expected as this is a cross-over of Honkai and the Nasuverse. The only thing I'm complaining about is the quality of writing as some things were hard to understand if you don't reread multiple times. Overall a 4.8/5

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4DXOZ_VE

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Joel_CS

I love this fic fr, i hope you will keep on translating this fic until its complete. Good luck and See you later Author

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Shalan1000

The story is a pretty good read.The first thing I like about the story is how Shirou emotionally grows from his mindset into a proper parent to Elysia and how he takes care of her is heartwarming.The Translation quality is decent and there isn't a lot of mistakes in grammar or mistranslations as far I have seen and it isn't noticeable and later in the story when he starts to learn about his archer powers to protect Elysia, the story starts to ramp up and things start to get more interesting so as far as i have read I can recommend it to you.

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Supreme_Lazy_Otaku

Pretty good, though it have few typos and sentence that make no sense. My only complain about this, is that I feel that the mindset of each person, is narrow and prejudiced. And they would make actions that make no sense whatsoever. It just feel like a depressive book where everyone is the enemy, then a cheerful book about being a mother.

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Elysia_Husband

its quite confusing to read but its good story so far keep a good work😉😉😉

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spectermerlin

Overall this is actually a good Chinese fanfic, it's just a bit evil with its idea. The protagonist doesn't resemble Emiya much, he acts more like a very skewered version of him, but with the same goals and traits.I recommend the author to continue his editing or I'll be seeing him every night in his dreams 🙏🙏🥰

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Carol_Santos_Souza

if you are looking for a novel with action or with crazy twists, you are in the wrong place, now if you are here for a relaxing and cozy novel, you are in the right place, the character is Shirou Emiya himself by fate, he basically becomes the father of a child named (Elysia) who is an existing and important character in honkai impact, and the story tells of their development as a family. and that.

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Chummy

even though i know nothing about this game I enjoyed reading .......................................................,...............

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Manny_Douriet

Though out this story so far I have seen a lot but this story is bringing to life the idea of If shirou had an Elysia in his life since in this story if has shown shirou is realizing just how distorted or machine like his thinking is like since seeing the prime example of Elysia being more Human I also like how both seem to reflect each other's existence since raising Elysia is making Shirou think for from a humans perspective then the machine like thinking that would be normal for his character just seeing the interaction just makes me think how a grown Elysia would be like with Archer otherwise Solid 10/10 story for me so far

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