The Unforged Blade: A Swordsman's Destiny

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ZEROkun1015

Hey guys! Umm, author here. Just giving myself a shameless rating xD. I'd like to thank everyone who has read this novel so far, it means a lot to me. So, I realize that in some of the early chapters, there quite a lot of errors and stuff that I prolly could've written in a better way. Until I wrote the fifth chapter, I really couldn't find a style and was still learning on how to write in decent way, since this is my first work, its not an excuse or anything, but I thought I should make it clear. I'm still learning and I hope to improve with each day passing. And for this, I thought I'd rewrite the first four chapters, and re-upload it. I hope you guys can check it out and provide me any feedback. Lemme know if I should make any corrections. I'll try to be more expressive and show a bit more than what I wrote initially, info about stuff that I should've provided right from the start If you guys want to ask me anything, please do so in here. I'll try to respond to any questions to the best of my abilities. Once again, Thanks to everyone for sticking with this novel so far, I really appreciate it. Thanks, ZEROkun1015

Good story! Hoping to see more of Takeshi and the rest of the characters. Do update on a regular basis, as I see it, there has been quite a lot of gaps between chapters.

The story seems intriguing, liked the world setting, and the swords have me intrigued. Would like to see how Takeshi turns out to be. Would be nice if you updated more and consistently

This is an interesting one! I like the world setting, the characters and all. Early on, your description of the characters and the places were kinda lacking, But you seemed to have improved upon that in the later chs. Keep up the good work, looking forward to reading the rest!

"The Unforged Blade: A Swordsman's Destiny" is a captivating manga that seamlessly blends elements of action, adventure, and character development. Set in a richly imagined world where swords hold immense power, the story follows the journey of a skilled swordsman as he navigates a treacherous path filled with challenges, betrayals, and self-discovery.One of the manga's strengths lies in its well-crafted characters, each with their own motivations and complexities. The protagonist's growth as a swordsman and as a person is portrayed in a nuanced manner, making him relatable and compelling to follow.The artwork in "The Unforged Blade" is stunning, with detailed illustrations bringing the world and its inhabitants to life. The action sequences are particularly impressive, conveying a sense of speed and intensity that keeps readers on the edge of their seats.While the plot may follow some familiar tropes of the genre, the manga manages to inject enough twists and turns to keep readers guessing and engaged. Themes of honor, redemption, and the true meaning of strength are explored in a way that feels fresh and thought-provoking.Overall, "The Unforged Blade: A Swordsman's Destiny" is a must-read for fans of action-packed manga with compelling characters and immersive world-building. Its blend of thrilling battles, emotional depth, and thought-provoking themes make it a standout in the genre.

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VuTrinodro

Nice read, pretty inconsistent with updates tho. But overall done a good job with the pacing, characters and world setting. Kinda surprised it hasn't gotten a bit more traction, but this barely has enough chapters so, keep it coming bruv.

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dufus

Great read, really liked the descriptions for the surroundings and characters. Just keep writing, my friend. Be consistent and I think you're good to go!

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Fulmag

Nice one! I really had a good time with this. Although I'm still too early to write a definitive review on this novel. I have good expectations for this. Hopefully, It'll turn out well. Keep writing!

I really enjoyed reading this, the writing style and descriptions seemed to have improved further along the chapters. First chapter in itself felt a bit rushed, and could've used a lot more description, but after a couple of chapters, I see significant change. There are tense issues tho, Not saying grammar issues are really irritating in here, but you could work on that too. Keep it up!

Takeshi feels like a slight attempt to deviate from the usually revenge-minded mc. The characters are well-developed, the comedy is nicely blended in and the pacing and balance of action. There are some nice moments here and there and it makes it a nice read.

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