Chapter 17: Storyboard - Author's QNA - Character Concept art
PS : THIS CHAPTER IS FOR STORYBOARD AND AUTHOR'S QNA ONLY, ALSO I WILL KEEP ADDING THIS CHAPTER NEW INFORMATION AS THE NOVEL KEEP GETTING NEW CHAPTERS/THIS WILL KEEP UPDATED
CHARACTERS CONCEPT ART :
1.Takashima katsuo Ch1
2.Takashima katsuo Ch 10
3. John Dunham
4. Kawabata Kiichiro
5. Shimada Akemi
6. Sugawara Rei
7. Takashima Harumi
8. Shimada Hana
9. Hebiyama Yumie
10. Hirayama Rin
11. Yozora Miki
12. Oguchi Keita
13. Shin Ga-Eun
14. Nakazawa Megumi
15. Junko Bernadette De La Roche
16. Hebiyama Manami
Hello guys, good day to everyone of you out there, first of all i wanted to thank you for everyone continuous support for my work, especially the comments, ideas, and critique that you give me, it means a lot to me and makes me learn more about writing a compelling story that everyone can enjoy
Today i want to present you the storyboard about my original fic 'Reincarnated into abyss' it's a story i written as a NTR revenge fic against many mangas that i read, i want to tell about the idea where I got the story, the characters and their NTR tropes, i also want to answer general questions that people ask, and i will answer any questions about my fic in this post, also i tried to create the characters in my fic using AI hahaha
While this story is an original story that i created have no connections from actual NTR manga/hentai but i used a lot of the usual NTR manga trope that i will explain later, as a criticism to the glorification of NTR genre that hails cheating,adultery, rape, and sexual assault sometimes blatant misogyny in high regards
The main inspiration that i have while writing this story are :
1. Netorare Manga No Kuzu Otoko Ni Tensei Shita Hazu Ga Heroine Ga Yottekuru Ken
2. Kokujin no Tenkousei NTR ru
3. The Boys (Amazon movie Series)
1. The first inspiration is a manga probably you guys heard of the premise is really unique, a normal man isekaied into NTR manga as the antag but he doesn't want to NTR the mc at first, i thought it's going to be a Vanilla story about the antag running away not to destroy the relationship with MC and FMC but in the end he got the FMC anyway because somehow FMC keep throwing herself to antag without any believable reason, and the MC becomes the bad guy stalker because the FMC is stolen by The antag, from this story i formulated the theory that the laws of NTR manga world no matter what happened will always favor the antag as the 'hero' in NTR stories, and that's why our boy Katsuo will face this challenge as challenging Kiichiro means challenging the world of NTR itself, so begin the journey of Katsuo to defy fate itself by becoming the villain of the story, And finally will the journey and growth Katsuo have here would make him a better person or maybe even worse than Kiichiro?
2. Probably the most infamous NTR story people know, about a boy who lost multiple woman close to him by the antag, this story is basically the blueprint of my fic as katsuo lost his Gf, best friend, big sis, and a mother figure to the antag just like hiroki, in a nutshell if hiroki is peter parker, katsuo is miles morales
3. I always like the dynamic of the boys conflict, bunch of Vigilante branded as criminal by the public who's actually the good guys VS Bunch of Superheroes who adored by the public that actually scumbags just like Katsuo VS Kiichiro position in the story right now, and also The boys in the core is an NTR revenge story hahaha
Basically the core of the story is an underdog story about a protagonist that branded as an outcast try to reclaim what's been taken from him against the person who practically blessed by the Gods, growing up i always watched action movies and my favorites are Jackie Chan movies, in Jackie chan movies he always portrayed as an underdog fighter that likes to use his skills his wits and creativity to fight against bad guys, he's not op, and he will get his ass kicked, but trough sheer determination he prevails
While this story as a core is a tragedy and drama, i always like humor and comedy in a story as long those humor and comedy doesn't undertone the seriousness of a scene that currently happened, or used to continue the plot of the story, also i really loved the unpredictable humor style of Undertale, and Meta Humor of Honkai :star rail, i figured since the MC is a person who reincarnated from our world he will comments and reference about pop culture in our world
Next topic i wanted to tackle is the characters, i wanted to talk about the character inspiration, the original personality of the characters, the NTR tope and some extra commentary, remember the character inspiration doesn't mean they are 100% similar but, i just take few aspects of the character i inspired by so you can get the general idea about my original character
1. Takashima Katsuo / John Dunham
Namesake :
Katsuo means Victorious Hero
Traits :
Original Takashima Katsuo : (Meek, passive,honest, kindhearted, naive, emotional, peaceful,likes to study and smart, a huge anime and manga otaku, gamer)
John dunham : Tough, chill, family man,Quick to anger if pushed,street - smart,humorous, reliable, subdued, pop culture and japanese culture freak, gamer
Character Inspiration :
Johnny Cage ( Mortal kombat)
NTR Trope:
The MC who Killed themselves in the end of an NTR story by hanging because tortured by the antag
Explanation :
Inspired by the absolute menance that is Johnny cage
The new katsuo is born by mixing John and Katsuo personality, feelings, and memories but still John is in majority control of the personality (80%-20%)
Katsuo who feels anger and despair because everything taken from him meets John who live a fulfilling but uneventful life, becomes the katsuo that seeks vengeance for thrill & amusement, in katsuo mind it's not justice if he didn't have fun, as a person who got nothing to lose he tends to go all in, and willing to bet his life to do whatever he want to achieve,has trust issues because he was betrayed, has absolute confidence in himself because he's tired pushed around, but sometimes his arrogance can lead into consequences
2. Kawabata Kiichiro
Namesake :
Kiichiro means Golden Child
Traits :
Manipulative, childish, insecure, always craving praise and attention,temperamental,likes to torment and blackmail people, cunning, narcissistic, arrogant, misogynistic, Whiny, Sore loser
Character Inspiration :
Homelander (The boys series)
NTR Trope :
Manipulative Antag that likes to make woman, especially strong willed woman or woman with a passive or meek BF or Husband, become his slave and proceed to make brag it to the husband/Bf/Son, He believes that he is center of the universe, and every woman belongs to him, This antag usually treats another man as a lesser being, and woman as an object for his pleasure
Explanation :
This antag is the scum below the scum, appears good outside but rotten inside, He is a perfect young gentlemen physically born into a rich family , great in education, great in club achievement, has a big dick and good in bed, not because of his effort and hardwork but because the world dictates so, likes praises and adoration from people, but he also likes to bully and torment people for fun, because of his upbringing he believes everything in this world is rightfully his, that's why he despises everything he can't control, and act like a loser whenever his plan didn't work, he also likes to make woman who didn't fall for him becomes his slaves and toys, he especially likes when he violated strong willed woman so they can bend to his will, believing that all women are just an object for his pleasure
3. Shimada Akemi
Namesake :
Akemi means Bright Beauty
Traits :
Confident, strong,competitive,determined,sweet, fashionable,outgoing, helpful, likes to be popular, likes being praised, a little hypocritical, protective to her friends, a good hearted person deep down
Character Inspiration :
Miyamoto Musashi ( Fate Grand Order)
NTR Trope :
FMC that manipulated by the Antag and betraying mc (Usually this trope has the antag blackmailing FMC by trying to expose the promiscuous photo of MC/FMC, or Manipulating FMC to sleep or date with antag in pretense so she can become a better woman for MC, but ends up choosing the antag)
Explanation :
Former girlfriend of katsuo and current girlfriend of Kiichiro, also she's the childhood sweetheart of Katsuo, she got manipulated into thinking katsuo cheated on her and taken advantage by the antag to become his girlfriend, she uses false justification to betray katsuo
4. Sugawara Rei
Namesake :
Rei means Bell
Traits :
Cheerful, positive, talkative, airhead, naive,optimistic, likes to eat sweets, likes to watch anime, likes to watch idols, crybaby, childish, likes to tease her friend, easy to manipulated
Character inspiration :
Yuigahama Yui (Oregairu)
NTR Trope :
Fmc is a close friend with MC, they clearly like each other but too shy to tell the truth, FMC then stolen by antag before MC have the chance to confess ( If I'm not wrong this is the plot of NTR manga : When you let go of my hands)
Explanation :
Rei is Katsuo best friend and close with Kiichiro and Akemi, she is an overly naive girl who thinks the world is all about sunshine and rainbow, after hearing what happened to akemi, she want to confront Kiichiro to ask him apologize to Katsuo, she believes everything can be normal again, alas it was beginning of a downfall with her as she too manipulated to become Kiichiro minion
5. Takashima Harumi
Namesake:
Harumi Means Beautiful Spring
Traits:
Brash, crude, rebellious,delinquent,gyaru emotional,loud, troublemaker, overbearing, social media freak, speak before think type, tsundere, likes handsome and popular boys
Character inspiration :
Momoka Kibitsu (Sket Dance)
NTR Trope :
A big sister that worried about little brother getting bullied, went to the antag to beat him up, ending up charmed and liking the antag instead ( i think ratatat write this exact NTR manga but i forgot the title lol)
Explanation :
Katsuo's big sister sho also fallen for kiichiro, she was close with katsuo when they are childhood, but when they grew up they drifted apart, but still deep down Harumi still cared about katsuo and went to confront her brother bully, but instead got charmed by him, different than other girls, Harumi actually fallen for Kiichiro without any manipulation or drugs involved, after she becomes Kiichiro lover, she then gaslit to believe that her brother is a bad person
6. Shimada Hana
Namesake :
Hana means flower
Traits :
Single mother, Mature,gentle,calm,sweet, understanding, passive,kind, hardworking, lonely, stressed out, likes to drink sake
Character Inspiration :
Mamako (Okaa san online)
NTR Trope :
Mother that fallen for the Antag because of her daughter and they got dominated together (i forgot about the manga title but it involves mother and daughter getting gangbanged in an onsen)
Explanation :
Akemi's mother, and a mother figure to Katsuo, she knew katsuo since a child and treated him like his own son, her husband died when akemi still a child, and since then she's focused on working to provide a good life for akemi, she usually drinks sake by herself after working, Kiichiro then took advantage of her while she drunk and charmed her, she also like to have sex with Kiichiro as means to release stress until she got addicted
7. Hebiyama Yumie
Namesake :
Yumie means Helpful snake/Helping serpent
Character Traits :
Cold,ruthless, blunt, elegant, classy,disciplined, intelligent,wise,ambitious,charismatic,sadistic, cared about her employees and workers,have no mercy for people who antagonize her,a doting mother,hates small talk, have a soft spot for teenagers and children, have great instinct
Character Inspiration :
Kusora Yurea ( Ore no genjitsu wa ren'ai game)
NTR trope :
A strong willed Mother who fallen for antag to protect her child/to make antag stop bullying her child or straight up blackmailed her by using her child
Explanation:
In the original timeline she was the final boss of the manga and the last woman antag has to conquer, she's got dominated because kiichiro taking advantage of her desire to protect her daughter, but because in the new timeline katsuo giving information to save her daughter, she become katsuo biggest benefactor and supporter, she also likes katsuo do or die attitude
8. Hirayama Rin
Namesake :
Rin means Dignified
Trait :
Cool, Aloof, have a strong sense of justice,smart determined, hard worker, loyal, trusting, strong, blunt, like to defend weak and helpless people, naive, believe in by the book justice, genius martial artist, typical shounen protagonist
Character inspiration :
Cammy (Street fighter 6)
NTR Trope:
Female martial artist who is a captain of a club/dojo, becomes the antag plaything after beaten in a fight with the antag
Explanation
One of the Kiichiro capture target that Katsuo is currently trying to save, a headstrong character, with a great sense of justice, she was fallen in original timeline because of her naivety, respected katsuo for his tenacity, Akemi's rival in martial arts department
Question that people ask:
1. Is this a redemption story or punishment story?
Both, but i want to make it believable whether the characters are deserving redemption or punishment
2. Will katsuo make allies?
Yes he will, katsuo will start making allies after i feel reader already grasped the concept of katsuo as a character, i want characters that befriend katsuo, allied with him because of strong reason, not just jumping on his dick because he is the main character
3. Will katsuo have OP powers?
Have powers yes, OP no
My concept of katsuo power is like in Fear And Hunger game, it not about op power but using the right skill at the right time, even the most niche skills can be effective in a certain condition, even if katsuo ends up with a power that looks op it would have heavy restriction and price to be able to use it, so don't worry katsuo won't end up as a black necromancer that raises army of the dead to kill antag
4. Will he got a harem?
I don't know, i will let the people decide 😉👍
5. Why Katsuo is acting like a madman in japan?
If you guys familiar with pro wrestling, katsuo is playing a heel character, basically a villain in front of public because he wants to have fun, besides insulting the antag of course, his true persona is shown when he is talking with the people that allied with him(Lady yumie and Rin) or when talking one on one with the antags(like with Kiichiro), in fact one of the character already guessed Katsuo wasn't a japanese/raised in japan because of his strange mannerisms
I think that's all for this time , feel free to ask me questions, giving ideas, advice, or critique
PS. if you don't find a character here that means I'm still working to complete their profile
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