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Jason Mitchell, a passionate software engineer, breaks free from corporate life to establish a game development studio. Overcoming coding challenges, he crafts the immersive game "RealmQuest." Navigating business intricacies, he launches the game, garnering global acclaim. As bugs arise, he refines the experience through updates, evolving from an unassuming programmer into a pioneering creator, exemplifying the power of perseverance and passion.
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Write a reviewI'll be honest. This is a fantastic book with great potential. It is a unique story! I think. The author's writing style is impressive and engaging, making it an enjoyable read. I would suggest that the author aims for more consistent chapter releases, preferably one per day (maybe two), to keep readers engaged. The world-building and character design are strong points of the book. However, there is room for improvement in character interactions, as the story sometimes feels more like a personal diary than a dynamic narrative. There is no Dialogue! I started to feel like he didn't talk at all in the story. Despite these minor issues, I appreciate the story and want to support the author in their writing journey. Good Luck!
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Personally I like the way you started. It might not be everybody's cup but it's chill. I see you've released 22 chapters/week. This may be advice coming from an amateur as well, but I suggest you try pacing your releases. Maybe two per day based on reading time of the readers. I might be wrong but.🤗🤗🤗. PS. If anyone would like to exchange genuine reviews and collections hit me up.
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I haven't read it all yet, but it's amazing. Especially the way you explain it in such detail. However, I think you should pay more attention to the dialogue parts; in my opinion, it's still quite monologous, so I hope you'll provide text for the dialogue. And if possible, lengthen the story in each chapter. Keep up the good work, friend. This novel is truly amazing! 🫸🌟🫷😁