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21.42% In Lookism as a system for Daniel Park / Chapter 11: chapter 11 : stalker arc End and fruad arc intro

Chapter 11: chapter 11 : stalker arc End and fruad arc intro

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  Zoe seeing her stuff gone missing everyday like her clothes and other things. As she asks her mother "mom where is my laundry" as Zoe asks her mother. Mother replied by telling her that's it's in washer basket. Looking their she dose not find it, Thinking this as Strange problem. And not noticing the problem is very severe.

Looking outside form her room window, We see a man holding her missing laundry down in the alley way. As his eyes  not leaving , watching her change her clothes form the window.

Then we cut to both Little Daniel and system both working in store as then system using big Daniel body asks little Daniel "Hey did you thought to about to what skill to upgrade as that token is still available".

  Then little Daniel who was thinking about the events. That had transpired before. looking at his down mood  system adds " I told you. That yui is not a good thing for you. Look at you like a guy who just got his heartbroken". System realizing something says  " Ohhh you are the guy with a brokenheart. Now you will train so hard as you will surpass all limits".

  once a great wise man said

" This is to go beyond. As I will not let you destroy my worlddd".

  little Daniel ignoring system remarks, decided to upgrade skill intimidation.  speaking  his thoughts Little Daniel says"Hey I thought about it and I will upgrade intimidation. As it is very useful until now".  Doing strange gesters to the holo screen. system asks "What are you doing?". Little Daniel replies "I am looking for the upgrade button, as every game i played had a button". System face palming himself  says  " Take out the upgrade token, Now just think about upgrading the skill in your Head". Little daniel follows his instruction.

System Holder

Daniel park little body

Strength B

Speed C+

Endurance B

Vitality B+

Intelligence S+

Are you sure to use upgrade token on the skill intimidation.

(Y/N)

As then little Daniel  selects yes as then. Seeing the gold token slowly turn to dust. As then intimidation skill. Upgrades to Bloodlust.

As the little Daniel checks skills details.

Skill  Bloodlust :

By using this skill. User can invoke fear in everyone or a selected  person. As your presence itself changes the power balance in the area. The stronger the user the stronger the effect.

As little Daniel thinks ' This skill can invoke fear in everyone. This skill is dangerous'.

As then big Daniel says "This is definitely interesting. This skill might seem dangerous but it is not. As it will evoke fear. But it does not give you power to Maintain that fear and looking at you the only things your gonna scare is insects, Fatty".  As then little Daniel understands. and realizing the last word says with an angry tone "I am not fat, I am chubby". System using the big body ignores the words of little daniel

They both are thinking of what they can do with this skill and all the possibilities. As then in store a man walks in. Little Daniel seeing the man instantly recognizes him. As then he hears beep

QUEST active.

Save Zoe form stalker. As her life in danger.

Reward???

Failure Zoe death.

Using help form big body counts as a failure.

As both Daniel gets serious. As then the strange man buys some alcohol. And a kitchen knife.

As they both look at each other. Then the man leaves. As then Big Daniel says " Call the police and also call Vasco, He will come the fastest. As this quest clearly says I cannot help you. And we are not gonna test or try to find any loop, With zoe life on the line. Your stronger then before don't hesitate to land a powerful strike. . Go fast follow him if things go South. Don't hesitate to land a killing blow. We will deal with the aftermath later, Now go Fast".

As then the strange man goes in an alley while seeing Zoes broadcast. As in the same alley Zoe was talking on her phone. As she says " It's easy to earn money on paprika. As many guys give me money just for me to say their name and sing a song".  As then Zoe hears a voice" Excuse me but can your tell me the direction".  Zoe has watched to many movies to understands something's wrong.  she slowly backs away.

The man realizing that zoe somehow found out, Takes out a kitchen knife And starts running toward, zoe saying "You Bi**h calling random guy after i gave you so much money, you should be calling me husband now ". Zoe starts running seeing the man following her, Catching up. Due to not seeing the road in front she trips. seeing the strange man with a knife screaming something, She starts panicking. Praying for a miracle.

  Her prayers are answered,  she sees little Daniel come between her and the man. Telling Her to run.  Zoe Does not know what to say as her current situation is definitely that she never wants to be in.

  Little Daniel followed the strange man every move form a distance.  Having already calling police and not in any mood or situation to answer their silly questions. Little Daniel understands that if he keeps answering these questions Zoe is done for hanging up the cops.  He calls Vasco. Telling him all about the strange man as how he has a knife and is following Zoe.

Vasco without hesitation asks "Where is the bad guy tell me location. And I will come as fast as possible". Little Daniel tells him all the location. "It's in near the alley of the  store I work in".  He was about to explain further, He sees the man running after a girl quickly realizing who the girl is little Little daniel rushed toward him, With speed not someone like his size can achieve.

He sees how zoe also took off, Effectively avoiding the danger, But trips. Seeing the man getting closer to zoe. He runs between Zoe and strange man.  telling her " Run Zoe he has a knife on him find someone to help ". Trying to get up and run she realizes her foot is hurt.

The man seeing Little daniel between him and zoe without thinking much attacks Him saying "Who are you to speak between a husband and a wife matter". slashing toward little daniel, dodging the slash easily, He goes for a jab on the strange man which zack showed him. Easily landing a hit on the man face, As he falls down in a single hit, 

Without checking if he is down for sure or faking it, Little daniel rush to zoe to check on her leg. The man under the effects of alcohol. He did not felt the pain of Little Daniel hit's, Looking at how he is going near zoe, The strange man gets up and rushes bringing the knife down in an stabbing motion

with intentions to Stab one of them. little Daniel can easily dodge the stab but behind his zoe who cannot move thinks ' If I dodge zoe behind me will be in danger'. Letting the man get close using the same tactic landing 1 jab on face and second on the hand which was holding the knife. Disarming the man. And wanting to end thee combo with a left hook which connects. sending the man falling on the ground.

looking at the man who is down for the count for sure, Turns to check on zoe, Both not realizing the strange man getting up and slowly and silently moving toward them both. Checking on zoe foot, Little Daniel offers to help her get home. Just when zoe was about to say, looking up she sees the man behind Little daniel.

The strange man sees Little daniel and zoe attention is off him. sees his  opportunity . slowly getting near them both He pushed Little Daniel. Little daniel Falling on the the zoe. Not giving any chance to little daniel, He starts punching and kicking little Daniel who is currently using his body to sheild zoe form oncoming attacks. 

The Strange man screaming on top of his lung" Zoe is mine I gave her moon balloons as I am her husband. I will never let her be someone's else. As she is my wife". His loud voice attracts a certain someone. 

Zoe remembers little Daniel. she remembers that this fat looking guy, Looking at how he is protecting her the blows. The man realizing his weak attacks can't do shit. goes to pick up nereast object. A heavy brick. wanting to smash Little daniel head. As he was about to succeed. Suddenly

He is suddenly hit by a dumbbell on his face. As little Daniel looks at the place form where the dumbbell was thrown and spots Vasco their. Vasco is  breathing Heavily, Taking a couple of seconds to take some deep breaths and He speaks to little Daniel "You are cool. As then he says now without dumbbell I am feeling good". As then little Daniel thinks he ran here with that dumbbell in his hand.

Zoe looking at the man muttering about moon ballons and other strange things.  She suddenly recognized The Strange. Explaining and mentioning  his tag is Gangnam overload. As he is shouting it's execution. 

Then he saying " You bastards I am not letting Zoe taken away do you know how much moon balloons I gave her how much I Love her".  little Daniel Looks at  his face which is  looking like it's broken. The dumbell which hit him. Throwed him near the knife Grabbing the Knife.

He goes to slash Vasco. Vasco easily grabs his hand. As he then grabs him form his throat. As Vasco was about to Punch him. Vasco is stopped by the disabled old man. As he says " Pls let go of my son. He is my only son as whatever he's done. Pls forgive him".

As then strange man seeing his dad their he screams. " Dad why are you here. Did you took a look at my computer and followed me here. What will Zoe think about me after seeing you. It's all your fault as I am treated like this. It's all your fault dad".

As then little Daniel Seeing that man act like this remembers. How he did Same to his mother. As then man rants about. How government is trash not raising a guy like him but looking for the other man as it's all his father's fault.

His Rant is  stopped by vasco who  says " I don't get what you're saying. But stop Blaming others. Did you ever tried to change your self". As then man says it's useless all his efforts are useless as the society does not care for what he do. He can never overcome it.

Vasco stops  his crazy thought again and says "I overcame it".

As Then little Daniel feels Vasco's words moved him. As then little Daniel hears.

Quest completed

Save Zoe form stalker. As her life in danger.

Reward???

Failure Zoe death.

Using help form big body counts as a failure.

As then police comes and takes the strange man away in cuffs. As the man father asks for the officer to forgive him.

As then Zoe hugs little Daniel saying  "Are you hurt piggy. As she cry's saying. It must have hurt a lot right as he hurt you". As Zoe is hugging little Daniel.

No one noticed as a little tear slid down Vasco cheeks. As Zoe lets go of Daniel. She thanks Vasco for coming to help her and little Daniel. If he didn't have arrived. She says if he was late. That guy might have smashed little Daniel in the head.

As then big Daniel who was working in store knows everything is alright. As he is helping a girl gets something.

As she has heart in her eyes. Looking at Daniel.

Then next day at school. Big Daniel knows that Zoe and yui quit paprika. As Zoe gave all her earnings to her father. As then Little Daniel using the big Body thinks about Vasco words that moved him.

As then he hears in his head " Wow look at that what about my words which I  always Said. Give me one good reason to not take over big body and beat little body to a pulp". As Daniel thinks about a reason Zoe approaches him.

As Zoe asks " Where are is your little friend where does he live".as she is blushing. As then Big Daniel says "Yes I know why are you asking ". As then Zoe thinks that why is she is thinking about that little fat boy. When their is such a handsome guy in front of her.

System in his head Says "Good enough reason to let you live you survive for now". As then Daniel Not realizing the reason. As then yui approaches both Zack and Daniel.

As she says hello. Students around her seeing her face talks what happened to her. As big Daniel says hello to her.

Zack who was asleep beside Daniel thinks ' She is Great. Still pursuing big Daniel after being beaten like that' as the she gives a handkerchief. She brought to Zack .

As then both Zack and system are shocked and as Zack thinks she is gone crazy after that beating. Was she hit in the head.

As then yui says " I broke up with him. thank you for saving me form him". As then Zacks pretends not knowing what she is saying. As she then remembers that it was a secret.

As then big Daniel beside Zack hears in his head. " GIVE ME CONTROL NOW". As Daniel gives the big body control to system. System says to Zack  "Wow are you cheating on Mira. I never took you to be a playboy Great for you".

Breathing a  sigh of reliefs and adds "I thought Mira and you were both pretending to be in a relationship. For you to hide the fact that your gay".

As Zack after hearing Big Daniel words. He can swear he can hear someone speaking in his ear saying "Remove his tongue. As it will definitely cause us to get into trouble in future". But suppressing the urge to do it. He says to big Daniel "Talk anymore I swear a mother will lose her son. And I will  personally pay for your funeral".

As then Big Daniel says "Jeez clam down. I was just messing with you. You have no chill what are you a kid, Can't handle a joke".

After school we cut to duke's rap room as he slowly gets more viewers. As then we cut to yui who is approached by Gun. Saying he got a job for her.

As then we see Mira and Zack leaving. He is explaining to Mira that. He helped yui to get rid of her boyfriend. He was being forceful to her.

As then Mira says "Why are you talking to me about it. We are not that close".  As then the guy which Zack beated come their saying " I finally found you bitch. You were being a big thing tomorrow. Get killed by me now".

As then Mira says" You fought again. You promised me you will never fight again".

As Mira leaves. Zacks is sad the guys behind him starts mocking him. As they slowly see his face. They remember he is that guy lackey. If they messed with him. They will get beated again. As Zack says " you made me lose today. As Mira has left me now I have nothing to lose. Get ready now ".

As after Beating them Zack leaves. In a strange mood.

As the next day at school Zack say to a student " Namsoo I heard you are always on second hand Rana right. Pls help me find. Limited edition Jordan as I cannot find them any where". As Zack said calmly. But in student view Zack have him a order. That if he did not filled it he will be beaten.

As Namsoo spends all the all day trying to find the Jordan in the price given by Zack. Thinking about if he did not found it. He will be beaten.

As he messenged many sellers to sell them in the price but got rejected. As he is slowly losing hope. He finds a seller selling them in the price of what Zack gave him.

As he sees a good looking girl on the profile. As he contacts her. To convince her. As she says to mail him. But he remembers that last time when he ordered the a camera he got a brick. In the box not the camera. As he says. That he will get them himself.

But he does not know what danger he is about to face will he get the Jordan or will he get something else find out in the next chapter.

Story ends here.


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