Chapter 9: Writing Naruto and response
It had been a month since I settled in and brought myself an appartment room in Japan near the company. The climate is cool as it's morning and sun just coming up . I had breakfast and have completed 'Naruto' first arc " Team 7 arc" with many modifications and changes in it as well as hidden foreshadowing of some future arcs cleverly with help of my system ability. Also yes I have decided to publish Naruto manga in arcs as releasing one chapter at a time is quite tiring and this way is effective in keeping constant flow of fan popularity as I due to access to previous life knowledge along with all fanfic I read know them very well. I have way to much idea that I can apply in manga as half of the idea from other series still doesn't exist so it won't be copyright . Though some of arc are way too big but I can still publish 11-12 per episode in detail and publish it regular monthly. For the manga, I chosen some of the famous anime art style of my time and try make them as less cringy as possible. Within next two weeks the volume would be released. The entire volume consists of 12 episode with many changes in story and elimination of some. But due to this likeable according to system among people in future will be increased by 76% more. And its one short did showed good response in shonen manga catagory so will it . The influencecial manga readers have vote oneshort , 7th place in shonen catagory .But I observed that manga aren't much famous world yet. Shonen manga weren't much famous before 1984....shit I forgot about Toriyama . In 1984 , Toriyama wrote DB which within next decade anime and manga trending. I contract to my publisher to get info about him and came to know that he is just a newbie who have recently joined the industry. Its seem I had made a different timeline in present. Thanking my publisher for info , I asked him about the pre estimated response of my manga. He just drafted me the statistics of the sales .
Unknown to Laxman, many of the fans even publisher have high hopes for it.
Looking back at statistics and the manga in my hand I am quite displeased as in showing kind a satisfied response nationally but not internationally.
(By the way for readers)
Summary of the manga
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The manga panel starts with the narration by Hiruzen about the story of the nine tail attack on Village hidden in fire, greatest and biggest shinobi village in the whole world 12 years ago . The village was in chaos , forests in fire , water red with blood of the people killed , air chilled and moon gleaming. Only to be stopped by one shinobi , Fourth hokage standing on head of nine tail. Suddenly slammed his hand on his head and a bright light covered the panel. With words " He sacrifices his own life in order to protect village and seal the nine tails in an new born infant."
A little blond haired boy (age-5) chased by villagers with shovels, iron poles and kitchen knifes. The boy looked tired can fall any time but still fleeing from the crowd with his little legs to an alley. Suddenly stopped in track notice that he have ran into a deadend , panicking as the crowd closed his last escaping route. Next moment the crowd had exited the alley. The body of the small boy can be seen laying on garbage reck in the alley. Clothes torn from places and stain with blood. The dull blue eyes of boy devoid of life whole body covered in bruises. Picking himself up with his shaky legs clenching onto the wounds ,he walked through the alleys avoid any contact to human life. Rain broke out as if nature was weeping for the boy denched in rain without any clear destination.
Walking passed by a small noodles shop, halted in his track by the smell of the food. Eyes search for a way to have small glimpse inside but mind rationalise the thoughts food. Taking two coins out of his torn pockets and chenching in his tiny fist. The boy decided to run away but a growl from his empty belly stopped him. Before he could run ,a man hold him from his back collar and dragged him inside. Terrified, the little boy tried his best to get away from the hold of the man but couldn't. Closed his eyes expecting for the beating that is to come ,but it never came. Man said in gentle voice to sit on the stool and order his food while he bring some clothes of his size. The blond boy opened his eyes looked up sceptically into the eyes of the man. The moment the went inside , so the decided to leaves but the man appeared in front of him with some clothes. Changing his clothes ,the man introduced himself as the owner of this small establishment. Then the man asked him that whether he have decided what he want to order but got no response. So he began reading the whole menu for the boy. After some minutes, the boy points out onto a name reads miso ramen. Soon the man once again went inside to prepare the ramen . While the boy looked at thecoin in his hands knowing the coins were insufficient for the food he denied the food but was assured by the man the food was for free. He didn't need to pay. The smell of the broth reached the nose and stomach went to growl even more. Looking with his dull eyes whether the man was telling lies or not , he looked back at the ramen. The ramen given by the owner was one of costlier one usually eaten by ninjas rich in all the nutrition need for body. Taking a bites slowly with his chopsticks, the warm ramen melted in his mouth. By the end of it, the boy beared a small smile on his face. Outside the clouds have stopped raining and rays of sun through the clouds fell on the small restaurant.
Next panel , a blond hair, blue haired boy with tan skin along with wiskers ( first appearance with wiskers markers , not too spiky hair and similar to at height 5'4 ) running away from newly joined chunin after pranking them and hokage face at the cliff of the mountain. Chase through the city (only in name the place is called a village but it is a full functional military city , with architecture of place being fusion between Japan Edo period palaces towers , Indian temple and fort , roman roads and post modern buildings. The size of village is 4 time of whole New York City. Grand wall gates covering the village along with dense forest and mountain in back with one of them having carving of stone faces of all the hokage existed till Currently) to catch the boy named Naruto .12 year old Naruto is able to escape from the chunins who are chasing him only to be caught by his homeroom class teacher Iruka (7'6) and dragged by him by the ear back to class. On other side of panel The third hokage is shown talking to a random chunin about Naruto creating trouble again. Hiruzen (7'1) with two scars , one running along the nose and other over his right eyes yet lefteye is still working sitting in his traditional hokage clothes. In class room , every student is annoyed by Naruto(orange and black more ninja like clothes) and the moment he arrives, students start yelling him on prank pulled on them before leaving. Naruto laughs it of .
A pink hair , green eyed girl, Sakura (currently lives with her step uncle -step aunts, slightly big forehead (5'6)) gets pissed seeing him, gets angry ,covers up the distance in one jump punches him only for Naruto to substitute himself with a log with a tag " anger management dummy " written on it . Ino started laughing of along with the entire class excluding Sasuke ( family massacre by big brother) just brooded looking outside of windows and Hinata( lavender hair with honey orange eyes) ( disowned by family) busy shyly admiring Naruto. Shikamaru half asleep. Choji just munching chips.Sakura walk up to Naruto again to punch him but stopped by Iruka. Everyone sat in there place , Iruka along side Mizuki(7'5) gave there speech about the genin exam next day. Class is dismissed and Iruka drag Naruto to monitor him cleaning the stone face . Like canon things goes on and Mizuki puts on a seal Naruto to mess up with his Chakra control so he fails the exam. Naruto fails the exam and is been confronted by Mizuki about secret genin test . Naruto stealthy steals the forbidden technique scroll, knocks Hiruzen with sexy jutsu and learns some the technique from scroll ( multiple shadow clone , exploding clone , kunai shuriken shadow clone ) . An AMBU lands beside Naruto and interogates him . Naruto is confused and tell him everything. Before the AMBU can reply, they are being ambushed by 6 jonin level shinobi including Mizuki as their leader . Mizuki curses AMBU for helping the demon brat and with other attacks them. An all out battle begun and Naruto helps the AMBU in fighting them . To break Naruto spirit, Mizuki reveal the jinchuriki secrets. Third hokage looking from crystal ball curses . Naruto is frozen by revelation and is saved by AMBU who get stabbed by fuma shuriken at back because of letting his guard down. All other 5 chunin that are working with Mizuki are knocked out by AMBU . AMBU says that Naruto is not a monster, but his student, a proud ninja of village. Naruto is shocked and look at AMBU whose mask fells to reveal Iruka . Iruka jokes that he had gotten rusty due to not doing missions for a year . Mizuki sneers and was about to stab iruku only to be kicked afar by Naruto . Confident in his superiority Mizuki gives of a speech of how he had gotten secret power from his lord and drinks a portion . Recoved Iruka and Naruto with new jutsu fights off Mizuki. Mizuki is knocked out and captured. Iruka give him his shinobi head band and ask him to keep his identity as a AMBU member secret. Later Naruto is being confronted by Hiruzen about nine tails matters. After Naruto leaves , Hiruzen looked at the four stone faces especially 4 th hokage's foreshadowing a tale behind it in later chapters .
Next morning Naruto sneaks in IT department and prank Mizuki with adding stomach cleaning medicine and itching powder in the toilet paper. Naruto returns back for registration profile laughing about his prank and meet konohamaru who is just 4-5 year old. After persuing Naruto for hours , Naruto agrees to teach him sexy jutsu. Later , both of them are confronted by Ebisu ( chunin) and defeated by Naruto harem jutsu. Naruto gives his speech about hardwork and konohamaru decides to make Naruto his idol. Naruto smiles and walk him up to sarutobi compound.
The scenes goes back to classroom all passing students gathers . Naruto and Sasuke are cursing each other while Sakura and ino are competing on who will sit next to Sasuke only to be sat by Hinata along side Naruto. Like canon the kissing scene happens . Naruto gets chased by whole fan club while dark aura covers up hinata who is glaring at Sasuke. Sasuke fell chill going down his spine.
Sakura pushs hinata and tries to sit next to Sasuke . Iruka comes in class , gives a speech and start calling team names . Iruka ( jonin) calls out team 7 to Naruto, Sasuke, Hinata and Sakura with their jonin commander as Kakashi. One of students questions why the team have four people is reply by Iruka that hokage sama has arranged the team if have any questions ask him( I mean seriously, teams were been made by Hiruzen before the incident so he decided to put Naruto as an extra member of team seven) . He again start calling of the names of team , team 8 with kiba inazuka , shino abarame , yukimo shiharu ( shiharu clan work with bird as companion) with Kurenai and shikamaru nara ,choji achimichi , ino yamanaka with Asuma , etc. Lunch break happens ( no Sakura insulting Naruto for having no parents) .
All team leaves one by one only team 7 left . Kakashi (7'8) arrives after three hours and they had their introduction, Naruto ( Strongest man to ever walk as it's much better goal than shouting becoming hokage) , Sasuke ( canon) ,Sakura ( becoming strong konoichi and marry Sasuke ) and Hinata ( having a family and free hyuga of slavery ) . Next day genin test under Kakashi happens . Naruto uses exploding harem jutsu , solarflare ( created by Naruto accidentally when in a prank be channel too much chakra in his face making it flash) , smoke scream ( made for pranking purpose so he can escape ), etc and Sasuke with fireball jutsu ,etc. Within teammates after many collision and cursing each other Sakura act bossy and punches both Naruto and Sasuke making them agree to plan and act together. Hinata make a plan and other three agrees. Team 7 were about to get the bells touch the bells but unable to get them . Alarm goes off and Naruto is tied to log post. Kakashi orders not to give Naruto any lunch. Like canon sasuke along with hinata and then Sakura offers the lunch to Naruto. Kakashi comes and says that they passed. They untie Naruto and goes to shinobi grave yard where Kakashi gives abandoning comrades and scum speech. Next day they started completing D ranks mission and Kakashi started training them ( Master roshi style DB only body training no chakra control , using D rank according to train body like construction work etc ). After one month of training , they get Tazuna (7'5) mission pretty much like canon. The ending panel being Team 7 on the gates about to leaves for Wave.
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To be continued...
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