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They say Black is not just a color but an indomitable attitude - a resilience forged through struggles and unwavering determination, a truth that resonates deeply within the Black Nation.
Embark on a captivating journey through the life of Jonathan Cole, an orphan boy destined by fate to be insignificant. He grew up on the unforgiving streets, evolving from a beggar to a thief, and then a thug entangled in the perilous web of politics. His life was a rollercoaster, marked by reckless gambling that often led to losses. However, everything changed when a glimmer of luck shone upon him, resulting in a 20-million bet slip victory.
But what is wealth without the chance to enjoy it? Jonathan's promising turn of fortune took a tragic twist when he was beaten to death and dumped in an abandoned house. but due to a miraculous fate, a presence intervened – The Mechatron System.
With a second chance at life, Jonathan Cole bid farewell to his stagnant existence, filled with thorns, and embraced a new journey filled with life's adventures.
Join Jcole in his relentless pursuit of stardom, wealth, military life and the revelation of a bizarre truth about the Black Nation. This is a story of rebirth, resilience, and the remarkable journey of a man who defied his destiny."
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Great work author, just a few chapters in and I'm sooo hooked, first, it was the synopsis for me, it was so captivating and it literally had me turning the pages immediately, the author had done such a good job in capturing the character's actions and emotion, he also painted a vivid image of the characters surroundings. Good job author, great work, this book definitely has great potential.
I really liked how you describe one world to another, the transitions were smooth. This story has potential and is very interesting. I hope the author has a lot more to cook up for this story! :)
Wow, very interesting storyline. This is actually the first time reading this genre and I find it fascinating. I can't wait to find out what happens next. So if you are a lover of good novels, kindly attempt this one and you won't regret it. Thank for recommending
The truth is I was never a fan of rebirth stories until someone recommend this particular one & It's quite interesting everything well written. I love it & I can't wait for the following chapters. Well done author 😊
That was really well written. Are you using a editor or all you do it all my yourself. Even I write little bit. Do check it out and i can't wait to read more of it
The writing style is okay but it could be better. I understand this is your first book, but I'd advise you to read more book based on this genre. The part about the system introduction was well written, and I actually loved it but you should describe that scene more with J. cole in pain and surprise, as those emotions weren't shown.But overall, good job but it could be better
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first off, I like the transition from one world to the next. you have great writing skills to be very descriptive and make good dialog between characters. Me personally I never been into the systems genre but you make it work. overall I like your story and I can't wait for more chapters.
NGL, the start was really interesting that made me read the starting chapter! The Character, the idea, the plot Author has cooked up is really good. I would recommend this to all readers to give it a try.
First of all your novel is quite well written... It is very direct which makes every chapter easy to read. Second, you have portrayed your Main character very well. His emotions and the environment or the surroundings where he's in are really well narrated. Third your ideas are very unique so I hope you can make more events and twists in the story that would show the development of your characters. Keep up with promoting your novel and I hope that you can get more readers.
This is me shamelessly promoting myself.Dear readers, this marks my debut novel and my first foray into the world of writing. I welcome criticism with open arms, and I aspire for this book to offer solace amidst the chaos of the real world.I won't dwell on extensive self-praise or how amazing this book is; I'll leave the verdict to you.
Lovely Settings, Thanks for recommending.. so here's my review, if you're looking for a nice novel to pass your day then search no further because this novel will do justice to your preference. Keep them coming, No spoilers here.
This is an amazing story line .. can't wait to see what happens next [img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I've only read a few chapters, but it truly provides an engaging narrative. However, in my opinion, you could be clearer in describing Jonathan's appearance. Nonetheless, this is something special! 🫸🌟🫷And don't forget to leave a review for my novel as well.