Fairy Tail: Satoru Gojo

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Emmanuel_Capricorn

there is overpowered tag but 6 chapters in and the MC does not even know he is Gojo and the best he could do his let his body feel warmth and get strong. Author should put weak to strong instead of overpowered.Or am JIwrong becauseI read this in the middle of the night in a hurry and I'm sleepy

Continue please, the idea is great, the implementation is very interesting, keep writing, you are doing well, good luck to you, more inspiration 🙂

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EnryuRUS

5 stars for the idea itself, which no one has realized yet, hope you can do it, good luck to you............................................

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AlHiLit

It goes well with beer. Hope you will continue this fanfick and will be popular......................................please give me money!!!

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dfkin_white

the only thing that bothers me is the length of the description and explanation of scenes . If you could try to tone it down, it would be a huge plus

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evil_follo

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Spelloyal

It's an interesting fic with the potential to become a good story, but several small problems that are so basic that they shouldn't be there detract from the reading. The most notable of these problems is that the author uses quotation marks for both speeches and thoughts, which sometimes makes it confusing to know whether the MC is speaking or thinking. Another problem are moments when the plot is forced, like when Cana looks at the MC when she meets him and he immediately asks her out on a date. It's not illogical, but the way all the development occurs in two paragraphs makes it strange, forced and uninteresting. Sudden and somewhat forced developments like this are common in this fic.

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Gohar_Iqbal_0964

Nice story idea very interesting don't drop it and plz keep the chapters posted in a regular manner it's a request

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iETTEL

Good enough, i like it very much. Good luck to the author so that he can continue to delight readers with such a wonderful story, also I wish him inspiration and more free time to continue this story.

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dfkin_white

it's becoming increasingly harder to read this . I was actually hoping the author could fix his writing . long chapters with long explanations that are useless for the plot

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I_Love_Hina

mucho gracias seniore

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Orion_7925

Continue please .Thanks for the story [img=update]

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Mir_Remon_2480

It's quite an interesting concept, new even. Gojo is an incredible character and since curse and magic are very similar you can make gojo's original curse into original magic which can be named as infinity magic.second thing. Don't make it a harem. In character wise Gojo never had any romantic relationship much less a harem. So if there's a heroine make sure it is one. and also please don't make Erza or Lucy heroine. Cause that will break the canon. Go for characters like mirajane or ultear.Gojo is an enigmatic character that moves like the wind. Please try to maintain that personality. Also your update seems pretty slow. It is the greatest weakness of this story. So please update regularly. And finally, thanks for all of your hard work.

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Doge_Protagonist

This story has a good idea and it executes it fairly well, the writing is good and the way he explains things with detail is pretty good. One thing that is a problem is upload time but that is about it for me so far to complain about.