Chapter 3: Chapter 3 who, what, and where
(Narrator) the group of teens get there stuff together and head out to look for Jamal.
(Dave) guys if something happens that am not ok with I am running back to the car and driving off.
(Jack) fine.
(Jean) so we're did you last see him Angelina?
(Angelina) it was near this small shack.
(Braydan) there's a shack way out here basically in the middle of no we're?
(Jack) that's kind of weird?
(Angelina) we're almost there.
(Dave) I see it right there!
(Jack) it looks sort of like a guard post cabin and less like a shack.
(Braydan) well what ever it is doesn't matter. We need to find Jamal quickly.
(Dave) yeah what he said.
(Jack) well we're could he be? There is nothing for miles and miles in any direction. where could he have gone?
(Jean) Angelina how did he get kidnapped?
(Angelina) well some guy grab him and pushed me on the ground and then knocked Jamal out and dragged him.
(Jack) so let me get this straight you got pushed and couldn't help him out.
(Davd) that's weird.
(Angelina) well the kidnapper's had gun's.
(Braydon) they have gun's?!?!
(Jack) you didn't say anything about more then one kiddnaper when you were telling your story.
(Braydon) who cares if there are more then one they got guns too! I have a gun but if there are more then one guy with a gun I am going back out!
(Dave) well Braydon right we can't handle multiple guys with guns.
(Angelina) well it was dark and it could of bin anything in his hand and I was on the ground!
(Jean) let's say they do have gun's we can't let someone die. So I think we should look and when we find Jamal we call the police.
(Everyone but Jean and Angelina) fine.
(Jean) ok then we'll Angelina what direction did they take Jamal?
(Angelina) that way towards the big hill.
(Jean) good then we got a place to look.
(Narrator) about 20 minutes of going to the big hill they find something interesting.
(Dave) hey guys look there's a huge bunker or military base here!
(Jean) that weird I don't ever remember hearing about any tipe of military base being built here.
(????????) help is someone out there!!!!!!!
(Angelina) that's Jamal!
(Narrator) Angelina runs into the bunker well everyone else tryed to catch up to her but she was too fast and got in there first and everyone else after.
(Braydon) hey Angelina where are you!!!
(??????) help me!!!!!
(Narrator) they all ran towards the voice they herd thinking if it was Jamal Angelina would be there and maybe the kidnappers too so they were ready to fight. until they ran in and got the shock of there life's.
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