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Best originals fanfic I have read. I am ruting for u author u get what it means to be an originals. Hope u do not drop the story.🤞 good luck with the story (ALWAYS AND FOREVER!!!!!)
I didn't understand the "no harem" tag. I dropped it the moment he said he wanted Lexi, even though he was with Qetsiyah, Even if it's just the two of them, it's too much for me. It's a matter of taste.
Terrible writing worse story. Don’t have words to describe how awful this was
Very good c'est une très bonne histoire j'encourage l'auteur à terminer l'histoire et de continuer à s'améliorer dans son écriture ............................................,..................................
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best TVD/Originals fanfic out there... Plz complete it... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Okay I AM SO GLAD!!! YOU DECIDED TO COME BACK TO THIS BOOK !!! Like I have been waiting and waiting and waiting for you update .. what to you so long ... I love this book so much love the characters love their interactions love everything about this book!!! So pls don't drop this book i wanna see it to the end 😍😍
its a good fanfiction but for a long time not undated.wating for new updates
I was just wondering if this story has been discontinued as at the moment it has been 5 months since this story has been updated and i want to read more of it.
100% Recomendet I really enjoed reading this ff. Hopefully the author is okay and is picking this story up again. if done Right this could be one of the best if not the best tvd ff there is. And this Story did lay a good foundation for maybe mutiverse if the auhor wants to.
One of the best original fanfiction I’ve read so far . I love where the author is taking story can’t wait for more.
Once I found out on the first chapter how the MC got five wishes and he used some of them on his brothers, and how stupid his wishes on himself were, I know this wasn't going to be an all that great of a story. Unfortunately I was right. The story was boring without anything interesting, the MC was living more for his family then himself, and the conversations between characters was awkward. So I dropped this at chapter 5 The grammar was ok though.
keep this going it's an enjoyable read and I'm liking we're the novel is going so far
yup it is very good but i have to complain bro you ruined this novel when you got into side characters a little too much also after they said system is updating it was never seen again and lastly you didn't specified power system in full detail like after time skip how powerful are they you should have written stats in systems like 10 stats for original family from real series and after you decide to give them boost every 10 year x5 then you should have written like 50 stats on every one of them and you should have added a little demonstration of their strength well whatever its good 👍
Thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter!!!! Space space thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter
man i honestly think this is a great book , but the 3rd person pov writing ruins this book for me . most chapters just go like victor: niklaus: elijah: i prefer to either see the world through the mc's eyes or a narrator , not this constant naming dialogue which makes it seem as if i'm in a game. i'm still early into the book so i'm hoping it improves by the half-way mark
this has been the most inspiring story of the original so far I hope this continues
it's one of the best originals fanfic that I read The romance is good between every couple
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Besides the first couple of chapters with grammar this is an amazing story and I highly recommend !!
.........I'm really enjoying the story, I just wish there were more chapters haha. That said, could some kind soul inform me about some fanfics with male OCs in TVD or The Originals?.................
I like the fact that towards the future chapters, the writer started coming up with good backstories that were not in the TVD series. And also the fact that the writer is adding new characters and plot twists to the novel. But i feel like the writing and the backstory can be improved.
I like the fact that towards the future chapters, the writer started coming up with good backstories that were not in the TVD series. And also the fact that the writer is adding new characters and plot twists to the novel. But i feel like the writing and the backstory can be improved.
one of the best TVD/TO fanfic great story development and the most important thing (for me at least) stable update. highly recommend
The only problem I have with this fanfic is that the updates are slow.I would recommend to absolutely read it.
best originals fanfic I have read so far [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The best originals fanfic I've read in a while, I am rooting for you author and keep up the good work, thank you [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Best originals fanfic I have read. I am ruting for u author u get what it means to be an originals. Hope u do not drop the story.🤞 good luck with the story (ALWAYS AND FOREVER!!!!!)
I didn't understand the "no harem" tag. I dropped it the moment he said he wanted Lexi, even though he was with Qetsiyah, Even if it's just the two of them, it's too much for me. It's a matter of taste.
Terrible writing worse story. Don’t have words to describe how awful this was
Very good c'est une très bonne histoire j'encourage l'auteur à terminer l'histoire et de continuer à s'améliorer dans son écriture ............................................,..................................
Reveal Spoiler best TVD/Originals fanfic out there... Plz complete it... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Okay I AM SO GLAD!!! YOU DECIDED TO COME BACK TO THIS BOOK !!! Like I have been waiting and waiting and waiting for you update .. what to you so long ... I love this book so much love the characters love their interactions love everything about this book!!! So pls don't drop this book i wanna see it to the end 😍😍
its a good fanfiction but for a long time not undated.wating for new updates
I was just wondering if this story has been discontinued as at the moment it has been 5 months since this story has been updated and i want to read more of it.
100% Recomendet I really enjoed reading this ff. Hopefully the author is okay and is picking this story up again. if done Right this could be one of the best if not the best tvd ff there is. And this Story did lay a good foundation for maybe mutiverse if the auhor wants to.
One of the best original fanfiction I’ve read so far . I love where the author is taking story can’t wait for more.
Once I found out on the first chapter how the MC got five wishes and he used some of them on his brothers, and how stupid his wishes on himself were, I know this wasn't going to be an all that great of a story. Unfortunately I was right. The story was boring without anything interesting, the MC was living more for his family then himself, and the conversations between characters was awkward. So I dropped this at chapter 5 The grammar was ok though.
keep this going it's an enjoyable read and I'm liking we're the novel is going so far
yup it is very good but i have to complain bro you ruined this novel when you got into side characters a little too much also after they said system is updating it was never seen again and lastly you didn't specified power system in full detail like after time skip how powerful are they you should have written stats in systems like 10 stats for original family from real series and after you decide to give them boost every 10 year x5 then you should have written like 50 stats on every one of them and you should have added a little demonstration of their strength well whatever its good 👍
Thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter!!!! Space space thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter
man i honestly think this is a great book , but the 3rd person pov writing ruins this book for me . most chapters just go like victor: niklaus: elijah: i prefer to either see the world through the mc's eyes or a narrator , not this constant naming dialogue which makes it seem as if i'm in a game. i'm still early into the book so i'm hoping it improves by the half-way mark
this has been the most inspiring story of the original so far I hope this continues
it's one of the best originals fanfic that I read The romance is good between every couple
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Reveal Spoiler Besides the first couple of chapters with grammar this is an amazing story and I highly recommend !!
.........I'm really enjoying the story, I just wish there were more chapters haha. That said, could some kind soul inform me about some fanfics with male OCs in TVD or The Originals?.................
I like the fact that towards the future chapters, the writer started coming up with good backstories that were not in the TVD series. And also the fact that the writer is adding new characters and plot twists to the novel. But i feel like the writing and the backstory can be improved.
I like the fact that towards the future chapters, the writer started coming up with good backstories that were not in the TVD series. And also the fact that the writer is adding new characters and plot twists to the novel. But i feel like the writing and the backstory can be improved.
one of the best TVD/TO fanfic great story development and the most important thing (for me at least) stable update. highly recommend
The only problem I have with this fanfic is that the updates are slow.I would recommend to absolutely read it.
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The best originals fanfic I've read in a while, I am rooting for you author and keep up the good work, thank you [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]