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Chapter 2: Kidnapping

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I woke up the next day with a heavily sleeping shoulder, I saw that Erin was embracing my like an octopus hahaha pretty damn funny, as soon that I was going to wake her up to make breakfast, pops called me and Erin wokes up.

-"Hi there babe is the old man, let me answer him and then I am making some breakfast"(Ian)

-"I need you right now in the 21st, Antonio's son was kidnapped from their place"(Hank)

-"F*ck, I will get there as soon as possible"(Ian)

-"And take Erin with you...<grunt>"(Hank)

-"Hahaha got it"(Ian)

-"What does Frank want?"(Erin)

-"Father in law pups he is your father in law"(Ian)

-"If I dont see the ring its still Hank"(Erin)

-"Get yoyr perky ass from bed Tony's son just got kidnapped"(Ian)

-"Damn, coming!!"(Erin)

As Erin and I drive in the F450 to the 21st, we eat some P&B sandwiches on the way for express breakfast I guess, as soon as we got there Tony's car just arrives and crushes inside the building, I looked to Erin and told her to go directly to the informants office with the others.

I came directly to the cage to see that Tony was punching Pulpo to the floor asking for the associates of this scumbag.

-"Where the heck is my son, tell me!!!"(Tony)

-"Well that's what commonly happens I remember that If you do as the cartel says they return the kidnapping wife or son without too much damage"(Pulpo)

-"Tony boy let's come to the office, he is not going to talk its his only way out"(Ian)

-"Maybe you should do as the cartel says Tony"(Pulpo)

-"If you dont shout the heck up I am going to break some of your bones little wimp"(Ian)

-"...."(Pulpo)

-"Lets go Tony"(Ian)

As we got to the informant's office Tony remembers one of the associates and got the informant file, just to talk if she knows his whereabouts.

-"So yesterday's clothes huh"(Jay)

-"Ohh shut up prick"(Erin)

-"Jay i need to search for the ideal exchange spot, planning the sniping spots and ambushes just in case Tony's dont get anything from the informant"(Ian)

-"Sure sir!"(Jay)

-"<giggles> WIMP!!"(Erin)

Tony gets the information that the cartel's guy Ernesto was in this motel, we geared up and go for that bastard.

-"Now I need someone to stay in the front and the backdoor of the motel, Ian, Erin and Tony go to the room, Adam, Olinsky in the front and Jay at the back"(Hank)

We break in the room but Ernesto was not there so we were going to search his room for clues of his whereabouts but Adam and Olinsky told us that he was coming to the motel.

-"Adam and Oli there are people in the lobby follow him to the elevator as soon as he cames out of there we ambush him"(Ian)

We caught him pretty easily, book him and push him to THE CAGE.

-"Hank please give me 10 mins with that bastard"(Tony)

-"Dont worry Tony I have some tricks that will make him sing like a bird in seconds"(Ian)

-"Hello there do you know that 2 of the three most excruciatingly pains known are the bone and nerve damage"(Ian)

-"LAWYER!"(Ernesto)

-"I learn from my career as a medic and a navy seal that much but it took me years to perfect this techinque, if you move carefully some joints of your body you can easily dislocate them and with a little twist you will have the worst nightmare of your life"(Ian)

-"....Law...yer!"(Ernesto)

I then quickly twist his wrist and it took Ernesto 5 seconds to scream like a rat, in the other side of the room Hank look at me with some pride and the others have some pale faces.

-"...AAAAAAHHH... they u..sually mo..ve them through so...me bus at the train station headed to Indianapolis... please just fix it quickly!!!"(Ernesto)

-"It was that hard sunshine? Oh also it wont leave any traces its awesome right?!"(Ian)

I twist the wrist back to the correct position leaving an Ernesto full of snot, tears and piss.

-"Remember me to never piss you off!!" <everyone nods>(Adam)

We go to the train station talked to the desk lady and she told us the bus stop, Jay and I took sniper positions, while Erin follows the kidnapper and Diego, Tony's son, we make the bus driver fake a motor malfuntion and when the passangers went to the other bus we will ambush this guy and save Diego, but something got the kidnapper suspiciously saw at Erin and put a pistol on Diego's head thankfully I had the shot and took him out.

[Congrats, you safe a kidnapping victim the system calculates the difficulty of the case and gifts ypu with a Silver voucher]

[The level of the vouchers go from low to high, Bronze, Silver, Gold, Platinum and Diamond]

<What are the differences between each other?>

[

Bronze can give you at best Basic grade skills, at worst ammo or low assets

Silver can surely give you Intermidiate and at best Advanced skills, existent blacktech gadgets and medium level assets

Gold can surely give you Advanced and at best Master skills, futuristic blacktech gadgets and high level assets

Platinum can surely give you Master and at best Grandmaster skills, Gene liquids and World level assets

Diamond can surely give you Grandmaster and at best Epic skills.

Do you want to redeem your silver voucher?

]

<Yes>

[Congrats, you got yourself the rare Hypnosis one time voucher]

[Hypnosis one time voucher: you can convince another human being of doing something, that doesnt go against his life or most tenacious beliefs]

Then the team go to the bar to celebrate and went home, 2 weeks later Jules resigned from the team she really freak out about that shot that I save her, I help her get a low risk high paid private security job in New York, I took the opportunity to expand our force, in my later job we usually have an all round team and I talked to the mayor and he authorized the team expantion.

I liked how Burgess work in this weeks so I got her a general intership spot, I make some calls and hire a woman called Hailey Upton and Tara Lewis, Hailey took part of our Detective team with Olinyk and the intern Adam, Sheldon Jin as our comms and archive expert, Tony, Hank and I as the Command team, Tara as a Profiler and with me in the forensiscs department, and the last addition was someone to took the job as a full medic of the team.

-"Come on Ethan I have nice Dental, life and housing insurance and te city of chicago is going to pay good money for the spot I immediately think of you"(Ian)

-"Ian its just that my supervisor already told me that I am going to replace in some years the Head of the Emergency Department, I talked to my people and there is someone interested I vouch for her"(Ethan)

-"Well then she starts tomorrow I am sending the labor contract and tell her to came by 7 am to introduce her to the team I owe you one bro"(Ian)

-"I have some Chicago Bulls tickets next month in mind"(Ethan)

-"You got it, see ya"(Ian)

-"Finally the team is complete brat! Now we got to talk what the heck are we doing with Justin I got some news that he is friend with that Catalano freak, I know him and he is going to do somethinh stupid and Justin its going to screw up again"(Frank)

-"You know what lets talk with my former officer maybe I can take him to Great Lakes nothing keeps you in the right way like the marines"(Ian)

-"The trouble is that he wanted to go kiddo"(Frank)

-"Leave that to me"(Ian)

Erin and I went to the prison to took Justin as soon as I saw him I already known that he learned nothing good from there and I use the Hypnosis one time voucher on him

[What would you ike to imprint in the subject?]

<Lets make him learn his lesson never go to that path again and to have the enormous desire to being a marine>

[Checking the viability of the hypnosis order... 100% without issues Do you like to imprint the idea in the subject's mind?]

<Yes>

-"FREEDOM!!!!!! Erin, brother, I couldnt stay a second more inside that hellhole"(Justin)

-"Well its a great tought Justin you need to stay away of that path if you want to be our future best man"(Erin)

-"Yea I was almost blind by that rock on your hand Erin, finally my brother catch up with you"(Justin)

Almost a week of our moving I took Erin to a luxurious dinner and the I propose her, she said yes.

"But you have to marry earlier brother, I am going to enlist to the marines soon"(Justin)

-<crying sobs>"Its great Justin finally we got you back"(Erin)

-"Yeah its awesome champ, I will make some calls to take you to Great Lakes so dont embarrass me"(Ian)

-"Great bro that's where you started I would love that!"(Justin)


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