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Chapter 4: Captured! Part 2

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[Faraday!]

Chang and Zigzag are currently locked in a cell.

Chang opens his eyes and sees himself tied up to the wall via a chain link.

Zigzag is also tied up.

While Chang managed to wake up, Zigzag is still asleep.

Chang looks around him to find that he's in some kind of moss-stone "chamber."

It's like a medieval torture chamber.

Chang uses his powers to disintegrate the chains.

He then uses the same powers to free Zigzag.

Zigzag opens his eyes and is confused about where they are.

Chang explains that they've probably been captured.

He then tells Zigzag that it might be a Celestial or something.

Zigzag asks why

Chang tells him what Veldona told him.

Zigzag finds what Chang said very intriguing.

Zigzag then allows Chang to break them both out of the cell with his powers.

Chang opens the jail-like door and walks out.

There's water dripping from the ceiling and something making a "ringing" sound far off.

Zigzag is a bit afraid due to this creepy atmosphere.

Chang and Zigzag walk around this jail-like place and they encounter more and more moss.

Chang attempts to grab his cellphone but he can't find it in his pocket.

Zigzag doesn't have his cell phone either.

They both attempt to escape from this place.

Checking everyone's corner and hall but alas, nothing.

They might be stuck here for a long time if they don't make it out soon.

[On the surface.]

Veldona is currently drinking a "mystery" drink inside of the tarven.

She takes big sips and finishes her drink in only a matter of seconds.

Veldona notices how much time has passed and she attempts to call Chang.

When Chang doesn't answer she goes into a panic.

Because Veldona doesn't know where Chang is she can't teleport to him.

She knows that teleporting to his last known location might be a trap to lure her in.

Veldona thinks about calling a friend to help her bring Chang to them rather than going to Chang on her own.

Veldona gets out her phone and calls somebody.

She looks through her contacts and tries calling everyone.

They seem to be busy but one of them picks up the phone.

[Bayon....]

Ring ring ring ring ring ring.

Billions of Light years away a small fox woman with white and long nappy hair answers the phone.

Her extremely seductive voice and her calming demeanor would make anybody feel at ease.

Of course "Bayon D. Fox" is a "Murderer"

She responds with

"Hello, this is "Bayon D. Fox."

Veldona responds with

"Hello Bayon."

"I have a small little request from you."

Bayon is intrigued as to why Veldona would go to her for help.

Bayon responds with

"Hm? What might you need."

Veldona says

"I need you to make a wish for me."

Bayon then responds with

"Oooh~ what type of wish."

"you finally need that rocket-sized did-"

Veldona then covers up the phone, stopping whatever Bayon is about to say.

Veldona then says while blushing

"NO! N-NOT THAT!"

"Yo-You see there's somebody that is trapped and I need you to get them out."

"Could you please do this for me?"

Bayon is now even more interested in what Veldona has to say.

Bayon then responds with

"I'll do it…"

"For a price.."

"Well…"

"Nevermind…"

"I will wish myself to you…"

"Be there soon….."

"Goodbye…."

Bayon hangs up the phone.

[In the Void where Bayon is existing]

Bayon walks around in "nothing" She looks "up" and then looks "down" She then says

"WISH!"

And then disappears instantly.

[Tarven.]

Veldona is currently sitting in Chang's room with Rosaria talking about how they could find him.

But just then Bayon appears in the room.

Bayon is wearing her white sweater vest her white short skirt, and her white shoes.

She's wearing so much white that you'd almost think she was a Goddess.

Her hair is extremely messy as always even having a brown leaf in it.

She also seems to be holding a kitchen knife.

Bayon asks Veldona for more details on "who she's wishing back."

Veldona responds with

"His name is Chang and He-"

Bayon interrupts with

"All right."

"All I need to know."

Veldona attempts to tell Bayon that another person is also there

"And a fox named Zigzag!."

Bayon stops and looks dead into Veldona's eyes.

Rosaria is creeped out by this and steps out of the room.

Bayon then says softly

"Zigzag?"

"I used him as my servant back in the day."

"I want my servant back."

"I'm going to go kill whoever took him."

"WISH!"

As soon as she makes that wish Chang and Zigzag are teleported out of the Jailcell and into a "safer" place while Bayon and Veldona go to Confront the Celestials Directly.

[Celesti Palace.]

The Celesti Palace is a place of wonder with its weird futuristic place with lots of lights and towers.

It's a futuristic Las Vegas with a big hill (said hill has the Palace sitting on top of it.)

Bayon makes sure to make a wish to change their appearance to humans.

Veldona and Bayon while disgused are walking down the streets.

They look around the bright and vibrant houses, shops, and hotels.

Bayon says in a more "happy" (as happy as Bayon can get) tone

"I would love to live here."

"It's nice in this part of the Universe."

Veldona is also amazed at how bright this place is.

Bayon tells Veldona to follow her into an alleyway.

They walk over to some trash cans and Bayon says quietly

"Wish!"

A military-grade box appears in front of them.

She opens it to find several different pieces of gear including an entire US Navy Seals combo uniform.

She puts on all of the gear and gets out a fully automatic M4.

She also carries some grenades and healing items.

Veldona looks at the gun and says

"How is a normal rifle going to kill Celestial beings?"

"The average Celestial's body is as strong as the core of a star!"

Bayon responds with

"These bullets are strong enough to kill demons"

"They aren't normal bullets though."

Bayon tells Veldona that

"I will be going up there."

"I will only kill the people involved in the kidnapping."

"Remember Veldona."

"No Celesti."

"Stay here."

Bayon de-transforms herself and runs up quickly to the palace gates.

There are guards but she easily guns them down with her special grade bullets.

She runs into the big palace floor with lots of stairs and halls leading to different rooms.

An Alarm over the capital city is called and they are being attacked.

Bayon sees a guard running away and she captures him.

She gets him to give her the keys to the announcement room. (broadcasting room)

They walk up the stairs and then come across a metal door.

The Guard opens the metal door.

They then get into a fight with Bayon using her pistol to shoot the guard in the leg.

The guard is forced to surrender.

Bayon ties the guard up to the wall and enters the room.

Bayon sees different radio equipment and other communications tools.

The tint of the room is green as the green light is coming from the big computer screen.

Bayon goes up to the mic and says this

"ALRIGHT! I AM GOING TO DO YOU A FAVOR."

"INSTEAD OF WISHING THIS ENTIRE NATION AWAY."

"LET'S MAKE A DEAL!"

"TELL WHOEVER LEADS THIS PLACE TO NOT TOUCH MY SERVANT!"

Bayon sees multiple people bust into the room.

They all begin firing at Bayon.

Bayon managed to dodge all of their bullets and take over behind a radio machine.

She then utters the words

"Yikes"

[Chang and Zigzag.]

Both of them wake up to find themselves in space.

Well on a platform in space.

A Ninja girl with a ninja outfit and a mask only covering her mouth walks up to them.

She has short teal/cyan-ish hair.

Chang asks the woman where they are.

She introduces herself as Galaxy God Avory and tells them that they are at (0,0,0,0,0)

Aka the middle of the Universe.

She then says

"I have gotten a letter telling me to keep you guys safe."

"Hopefully nobody finds us here."

A Portal forms and closes.

The Observable Universe walks out.

The Observable Universe is a woman who can only be described as having "the body of a galaxy" as her body is completely black with the only thing being seen being various spatial objects.

She also has a black ninja headband and big cube-shaped white eyes.

She walks up to Avory and types on her phone a message.

"Who are they?"

The Observable universe exactly talks.

So she has to write messages on her phone or write letters.

Avory responds with

"All I know is that a wish sent them here."

"It wasn't Baryon."

"But I did get a letter from Bayon."

The Observable universe sighs and looks at Chang and Zigzag.

She then looks up directly into space to see a person flying in their direction.

It's a Celestial in all-white clothing.

He attempts to grab Chang and Zigzag but The Observable Universe freezes him mid-air.

She then laughs but in an "animalistic" way.

She then puts him down to the ground and lifts her foot and puts it on his head.

She then types a message on her phone and shows it to Avory.

Avery tells the Celestial the message

"She's asking why are you here on her platform."

The Celestial tells them in an angry tone that he willhasebeddinghis reasoning.

Avery then are

"She is the universe."

"She can reset your entire civilization."

"She can blast a hole in space and collapse your civilization."

"Her power is not bound by Averyimitations of space or time."

"So you should do what she says."

"Or else."

The Celestial still isn't barging so the Observable Universe uses a justu to travel across the universe to give a warning to the Celestials.

The Observable Universe writes a note and duplicates it to create playedf them.

She drops them at the Palace hoping that the people would see the warning message.

She then goes back and asks the Celestial why he's here (again.)

She writes on a piece of paper what she is demanding and she gives it to him.

The Celestial reads it and it is asking for his name.

He doesn't even give out that information.

Zigzag walks up and tries to get information out of him by informing him that the Observable Universe just went to erase your civilization.

The Celestial gets afraid that the Observable Universe wasn't bluffing.

He still stays The Observable Universe takes out her sword and points it in the direction of his civilization.

If she does use the sword then everything will be destroyed, not just the planets and stars.

The Observable Universe gets in a battle stance ready to end it all.

The Celestial finally cracks and opens up about who they are.

He explains that

"I was sent here to capture a fox and a human."

"It's per orders of the boss."

"They want us to harm Veldona's spirit before we harm her physical body."

"Although not too long ago I have gotten reports that some White Fox is destroying the capital."

"She's running around with guns and shooting people."

Avery Realizes who this is.

"I also heard reports of Veldona being with said fox."

Chang is glad that Veldona is doingg okay and looking for him.

Avery stops him and asks

"Did this white fox have messy hair or short hair?"

The Celestial answers

"Uh, I think messy hair."

Avery then says

"Bayon huh."

"I'm going to temporarily reset all the rampage."

"She kills people for fun but she still has a good heart."

[Back at the palace.]

You know that imagery a while back?

Think of that but on fire.

Everything is burning.

People are screaming.

Veldona teleports to Bayon and asks

"Is this really what you wanted?"

"Destruction" - Said the Fox who's power is to explode.

Bayon ignores her and continues to terrorize this city.

As Bayon is committing mass genocide on the military she looks up and sees a green light.

Bayon instantly orders Veldona to teleport out of here.

"WE NEED TO LEAVE NOW!"

Veldona, not knowing what's going on, teleports out of the place.

They are teleported about 3 miles away from the Civilization.

Bayon wishes up a platform and a telescope.

She tells Veldona to look in it.

Veldona complies and sees Avory doing something.

[Palace]

Avory spawns into the Presidential room and gives him a long Japanese scroll.

He opens it to find that he has just been "put in incognito."

Avory then flickers outside of the Civilization.

After that, she pulls out her katana infused with a timeline and cuts the space between the rest of the universe and the space that the Civilization occupies.

She has effectively removed them from all spatial coordinates inside of the regular universe and has instead put them inside a container with 5 coordinates (the same as the regular universe)

She then Flickers into the container and swings her sword twice to restart time in this new universe.

Avery then body flickers back to the platform and throws the Celestial in a blink hole.

Avery says "He's staying there for 5 months."

Avory then calls Veldona and informs her that Chang and Zigzag are safe.

Veldona's nerves calm down a bit.

She teleports to Chang and Zigzag and then takes them off back home.

Bayon then makes a wish to go to the Kitty Space Bar.

[At the Tarven]

Rosaria is sitting in the room with them as they discuss what happened.

Zigzag tells Rosaria all about The Observable Universe and how cool he thought she was.

Rosaria sighs and asks Chang how he is feeling.

Chang says that he's feeling fine.

Rosaria smiles on as Zigzag blabs about how he wants to be just like The Observable Universe.

Rosaria hass been doing quests while the two boys were gone.

Rosaria has ranked up and is wearing golden armor.

Zigzag wants to go home so Veldona Teleports him.

Veldona teleports to Earth to go do something real quick.

That leaves Chang and Rosaria alone.

Rosaria asks Chang what his favorite color is.

Chang responds with

"I don't actually

Rosaria giggles and says hers is Red like a rose.

She then says

"Have you ever kissed a woman before?"

Chang says

"Nope."

"On earth I stayed inside and played video games so."

"Didn't exactly have much time for relationships."

Rosaria gets closer to Chang and says

"I might wanna-"

Veldona teleports behind her.

Veldona then teleports her outside the Tarven and teleports back inside.

Veldona then stares at Chang giving him the "You're my prey." Look

She then goes and lays on the floor like a dog and starts to fall asleep.

Chang can only take this as a sign that if he doesn't sleep then she'll break he's legs or something.

So he goes to sleep.

[End]


CREATORS' THOUGHTS
Mana_Cake Mana_Cake

two in one night.

Avory is now Avery but I don't care.

I'll call her whichever name.

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