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Synopsis
Broken pieces of ones remains, a shattered heart driven to insanity and cruelty. "You know... I really loved you... I truly do..." as she whispered those words into my ears, I thought to myself 'How come... it had to come to this...?' as she slowly buried the dagger engulfed with the pitch black Divinity into my heart. "#£+&... I'm sorry..." She then slowly let go of the dagger and were eaten by the Gods Nemesis. Seeing her entering the foul creatures mouth, my Divinity started to wither away as my true Gods body starts to disintegrate along with everything else.
'...'
'... You could've just saved yourself... you fool...'
'... but... nevertheless... Thank you... for standing up for us... my beloved'
I then opened my eyes and saw that it was all just a dream. "What was that?"
A sage living in some mountain started to dream of the same dream and so forth for countless reincarnations.
Reminder to the readers:
1. The story is fast paced
2. The dialogue are separated
3. Read from Down to Down, though there are special cases where the dialogue goes first but rarely
4. My style of writing is blunt, I won't go over what I've already stated
5. There's already a note left to avoid confusion
6. Use your imagination while reading it
7. The change of perspective may not be always linked to the former perspective and will be a new plot for the story before intertwining with each other
8. Have and enjoy reading my story
9. It's all real
10. '_' means it's an inner thought or a whisper
11. "_" conversing/trying to converse with someone
12. It's a combination of novel writing and script writing
Recommended music while reading.
1. Dynasty by Mia
2. Spectre by Alan Walker
3. Stitches by Shawn Mendes
Written by a Filipino author (NoveListsArts). A story of all the past lives the author lead. If you believe in reincarnation, Rebirth, Traverse then this is specifically for you to read.
Note: Full Map of the Ysra Continent, Being Glory City as it's center, followed by Eren, Theian, Clonos, Heseria, San, Ferlan, Androeia, Losien and Zanatic. The City's are in the form of ten circles, the more far out you're at the inner City, the circle keeps on getting bigger and bigger and the life style of each City's are completely different per City's, with the Glory City being the most flourishing city among the ten. The Zanatic City is a kind of City that is uniquely prone to death and alien Beast's as it is beyond and outside the protection of the Losien Frontier, it's now a City filled with the most wanted criminals, it also has many existing black markets and slavery's.
The revised chapters and the rest of the story will now be uploaded from this day onwards to RoyalRoad.com
New Title Name: God's Scourge: Return of the False God
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I am thrilled with this remarkable novel. The storyline is good creating an immersive experience for readers.
The novel may seem like any other out there but it has its own unique elements which makes it enjoyable. The start was good enough to catch one's interest and will one wonder what will happen next as the story goes one. Even though there were just a few chapters, it was enough for me to write a review. The only downside is the chapter length is less, but I think the author will increase the word count as the story will move on. I hope so.
This story is... convoluted. It is hard to keep track of events, and what is going on. The constant skip from perspective to perspective with little to no links sometimes makes it hard. Like the first chapter is from the POV of one character, and the second goes over the sage who stopped the war. It could be done better, and the story could use more development and longer chapters, or at least make more chapters go over certain events. The way it looks is like a puzzle that was put together wrongly with many pieces in wrong places. It has some grammar mistakes but they are not glaring, and the paragraph structure and word choices are acceptable, but the narrative as it stands right now is problematic and hard to follow.