Ordinary to Martial

Three planets, four races. Conflicts are common. Schemes are a norm. In the shadows a powerful enemy is lurking with the intention of malice. In this chaos, a man gets the scripture of sages. He walks the path of a martial. Follow his journey as he rises from an ordinary to a martial who can move even the celestial entities.
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This is my first work. Hence, before requesting powerstones, I would like to ask everyone's opinions, through comments and ratings. Through your feedback I will be able to improve.