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Spirit Within : Original

Author: Adi_Kotha

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Chapter 1: Here Comes the Spirit World

------------------------------ A Day Three Hundred Years Ago---------------------------------

The sky is filled with dark clouds and thunders, It's seems like that the sky is in a sorrow mood and angry as the an young man who lost everything in his life and around him there are piled up bodies of soldiers, It was a battle ground filled with blood and Sorrow, As the man walk forward he sees a solider alive with his last breath and the man goes near the solider and says " I am so sorry, That all of you are suffering this due to the darkness filled within me, Our destiny is Written like this, Just please forgive me", The man slowly closes the eyes of the solider.

As the man stands up and shouts out bigger by seeing the sky " I am not going to forgive you for what you have done, I had lost everything important in my life by listening to your words. I am going to kill you, and it may take years to do so.", with an anger he pick up and throws a spear with all of his strength that the spear boosts into the sky with a force and he yells loudly.

------------------------------------------- Present Day ---------------------------------------------------

This is a world where there is a another force with addition of all five forces, it's an energy known as Spirit Energy, In this world people intertwined with spirits of different types of animals as One can use the abilities and strength of that animal and some of the spirits may contain some special abilities and people uses the spirit powers to earn money, to fight and to defend themselves.

Within the special spirits there are 5 spirits that are considered as Guardian deities as they protect the world once from the wrath of destruction from the dark, The five spirits has control over different branches as they are, The White whale has a control on water and oceans, The Black Tiger has domain over earth and forests, The Red Phoenix has a grip on Fire and volcanoes, The Blue Dragon has control on Air, Sky and element Lightning and last The Golden Lion which is said to be the light power and with it's wisdom and purity all the spirits will obey it's words as per the legends, the person with the pure and clean heart can be chosen by the Golden Lion and the person said to be that he had the ability to lead the world into light and also the person is pursued by the dark for his powers.

Coming to the present day a Colosseum filled with people's shouts and joy, As among the people there was a little boy with full of joy in his face as he was jumping to see inside the field as he was about to fall, a warm hands of a women caught him and lift him into the air and says in a soft tone " wants to watch your daddy dear ?" and the little boys says " yes mother, I was so excited to see him" as she lifts him a little bit high as he can see the ground.

As the Vibrance in the ground rises the boy sees somebody entering into the field here comes the Five deity spirit users are about to enter the into ground as the first four enters the crowd yelled their names so loudly and as the fifth one the user of the Golden Lion enters into the field the atmosphere changed into something different and it's like peaceful moon night.

As he enters into the field the crowd shouting his name loudly and the little boy before was filled with excitement and joy and his eyes are sparkling and he was yelling " Father ... Father ...", and the man who posses the golden lion was looking around in Colosseum and when he sees the little boy and his mom he waves at them and by seeing the man waving at him the expression in the kid face was priceless.

As the happy moment was going on, then the sky suddenly turned into dark, the wind which is gentle until then became so different passing shivering feeling to the crowd as suddenly a portal opened in the sky. A strange hand came outside it's looking like a animal claw, by seeing the claw the people panicked and started running and the soldiers rushed on it the second hand has came out and swiped away the soldiers and then slowly the body of the creature was coming out and soon the full body emerged into the ground the soldiers and generals who rushed on the creature are annihilated, as the crowd was running to exit and the creature is about to attack the people, the five guardian deities are entered into the battle and they engaged the beast in battle gives a chance for people to escape.

The guardian deities are fighting the beast, the little boy and his mom hide in a place inside the colosseum and the boy witnessed all the fight, In the end of the fight the guardian deities lost the battle and four of them got courageous death and the user of the golden lion fought it bravely and diverted the beast into the forest and soon the officials noticed sudden disappearance of the large energy in the forest and as the soldiers went into forest they found the golden lion user lying dead on the ground and an different object was found there, they came to an conception that the golden lion user sealed the beast within the object.

As soon as the boy reached his father's death body he became silent for a second and he kept his down as his mother saw him (whose half body was only appeared in the pov), she says by shedding tears " Dear please raise your head, your dad got brave death as the ruler and by keeping your head down it insults his bravery, now everyone please raise your head to pay respect for his death, he may be our ruler but he was also a brave soldier" as the little boy raises his head, his eyes was filled with tears and he fell on the ground on his knees and as he was crying the crystal like tear droplets fell on the ground. 

------------------------------------------ 12 years later------------------------------------------------ 

As the story came to the present day in 2021, Rayner Lucifer the protagonist wakes up from the sleep from a bad dream, It was his first day in the college and he joined a famous college known as Spirit Academy, although he doesn't have any animal spirit, he got a seat in the prestigious college by his excellence in the exam, the story revolves around the journey in the spirit world with his friends.

 

to be continued....


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