the defect

LV 3

MrPigman

Good novel! Gets better as you get deeper.

LV 3

user1028

Shameless 5 star review from the author here, I would like to write a few words on what to expect from this novel. First of all, this is my first novel, and english is my second language. So expect mistakes, both in storytelling and grammar, etc. I, of course, will try to minimize them, but there's so much I can do. That is why I ask all of you, future readers, to give me every kind of feedback imaginable. In the end, this story should be enjoyable to you, the reader, not necessarily to me. That's why I need your opinions to create the best version of this novel possible. Moving on to the story. I will try to make the characters as realistic as possible, limit the cliches and forced plot. HOWEVER, cliches are cliches because THEY WORK. In my opinion, they just have to be implemented right, and they will offer an enjoyable experience. There will be romance, and at this point, I don't know if there will be harem. Stick around and find out, i guess:). Keep in mind that everything in the story happens for a reason. If something feels forced, please let me know, and I will look into it and, if necessary, offer an explanation down the line. Anyways, that's all I wanted to say. Enjoy the novel, and, again, don't forget to leave as much feedback as possible!