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Deus Interfectorem of Planet Ouron
Author: Annie_Mellisa
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Cruces, a 19-year-old boy from the city of Nemus, was sent away by his family to become a merchant, though finds himself forced to follow the path of a killer and finds himself on a venture to kill the Gods hiding on Ouron.
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Hello Author here, This is my first time writing a novel, any feed back would be appreciated and I hope you enjoy the story! Thank you, Annie Mellisa
This book while only having one chapter so far sets you in a unique world. Hidden powers are hinted to exist in the first chapter, giving this story a future promise of conflict and adventure. The author does a great job of character description and world-building, with each building and place within this story thoughtfully described. I love the aspect of gods within stories. It gives the reader a large sense of scale and lets you wonder how Cruces(the male lead) will grow and fit this scale. In summary, I think this story so far has a great start to what could be a great novel.
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