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Phoenix, born from its ashes,
Rises to the sky, with its wings spread,
The noblest, the wisest of birds,
Like a prophecy, the herald of freedom.
Everyone knows the Phoenix. It has been the symbol of wisdom and rebirth for centuries. It brings light and hope to the needy with its fire. But what if it burns in its own fire and cannot be reborn from its ashes?
When is a fire not a fire?"
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Hello! I wanted to express how much I'm enjoying your story and how fascinating it's been to follow the development of the main character in such an intriguing setting. Your ability to detail the reactions and emotions of each character really brings the narrative to life in a unique way. I particularly love how the plot is unfolding, especially by diving into the genre that explores the villain's perspective, which allows us to explore the depths of human and ethical complexity in such a raw and realistic manner. I would like to request, if possible, to consider not adding a romantic subplot to the story. I believe that introducing romance could potentially restrain the main character from taking certain actions or decisions that would be essential for their journey and development. Moreover, the absence of romance allows the narrative to focus more intensely on personal growth, challenges, and the exploration of the complex world the character finds itself in. This would also help to keep the plot focused and intense, aligned with the current tone of the story. Once again, I greatly admire your work and am looking forward to seeing where you will take these characters and how the story will unfold. Thank you for sharing your talent with us!