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Chapter 4: 2.Consequences

{Konohamaru: "The only thing more important than wearing the right underwear to the doctor is wearing the right underwear into battle!" - Rock Lee and His Ninja Pals(Spinoff) Episode XX}

"It has been 2 days since we started this exercise, I believe that everyone should have learned it by now, if not then, get ready to face the punishment, I will call your number and you will come forward and perform how far you have gotten in this exercise, Is that clear?" Rat-Sensei asked and seeing that everyone nodding, he began with the task in hand.

"No 1, come forward"

A 7-year-old came forward and showed that he could stick the leaf anywhere on his body where Major Chakra points are located.

Major chakra points are generally from where Chakra is released for various techniques, Minor Chakra points generally play supportive role, If one's chakra system suffers damage, then they could function without the latter, but if One lost the former, ie, Major chakra points, then using Major techniques ranging from Ninjutsu to Chakra Enhancement in that region will become difficult... Yes Difficult not Impossible as they will have to move chakra from the nearest region where the Chakra System is not damaged to the location where Major Chakra point is damaged, let's say palm, so it would be similar to how control's chakra outside of their body, but in this case this is inside their body.

Anyway, moving back, another kid could be seen showing That he could Do Leaf Concentration with Multiple leaves. If one is wondering how the kids who completed the exercise on the first day were able to achieve this much on another day, this is because the instructor gave a choice to kids who completed the basic sticking part on the first day, It was that those who completed will compete among themselves, Those who have the least progress in 50 per cent of total students, which in that case was 9 out of 18, ie, who ranked 10th to 18 in this sub competition will have to go through Resilence Training.

However, the carrot on the stick for this case was, points!, 1st place gets 200 points, 2nd 199 and so on, and even if they came 10th they would still get 191 points, so it was technically a win-win type of case.

"No 13, come forward"

An average 5-year-old who didn't look cute came forward and demonstrated his progress, He also showed Multitasking by doing it simultaneously with the leaf on all major chakra points, but also he was able to move the leaf on his body, which requires some control over Chakra thorough pathways and Minor chakra point, but also some sort of technique.

He undoubtedly earned 200 points for his display.

"No 39 "

This kid was able to stick the leaf for half a minute before it got unstuck, the minimum goal for everyone was at least one minute and this kid undoubtedly got an L.

"Very well, you were last, we will start the Resilience Training with you first, No 13 come forward," Rat-Sensei said and so he did, the uncute kid who got first place.

"You know what to do" Rat-sensei handed no 13 a wrench, Surprisingly, neither party protested, coz they knew what would happen if any one of them protested.

No 13 was given 10 minutes to make No 39 scream, if he failed to do that then, he would have to give the same opportunity to No 39, now even if what he going to do was way below his non-existent Moral Compass, as he didn't want to torture 6 year old, however, his survival will be in danger in the long term, he knew that if he protested, then this kid will torture him.

Now, He could guarantee that he won't even blink when a kid who is wet-behind-ears, tries to torture him, but in the long term, his action will make this act of his a protest against the system, and He is no under the assumption that some other kids might follow his example, so if He was under a supervisor position like Rat-Sensei or Principal Mr Danzo, what would they do?

He didn't want to check whether they had something like Mind control or Shisui's MS at this point, so to lay low, he is going to do what needs to be done.

Plus, technically he is helping the kid build pain tolerance, so he is technically doing a good deed... Right?

{Slight Gore Warning ahead, things you will expect from torture, continue from next notice in these curly brackets}

Anyway, No.13 started by removing the nails of the target, slowly, and by mistake or not, he might have touched the wretch on the spot of unprotected nails. No 39 held his mouth shut, his tears might be just due to some dust in the air... anyway, he didn't last this long, just this basic act of removing the nails made him give up after 5th nail.

Oh, I may or may not have mentioned, but Screaming doesn't mean that torture will stop, it has to go through the whole 10-minute mark as this is a punishment.

Anyway, by the end of this 10-minute mark which also included some one or two minutes of just nothing to only continue this cruel odyssey, No 39 was reduced to a sobbing mess when he went to the standby Medic nin present.

The next pair came to do the deed.

{Author's Unholy Jutsu: Time Skip}

Some advanced things like sticking heavier things on your body than Leaf was made to do and some more Tor-Resilience Training later, we have finally arrived at Taijutsu-only Spars.

"No 13 vs NO 31" 

No 13 had become the top of the class when applications of Chakra were introduced, not like he was that much behind before, anyway, on the left side was an uncute kid and on the right side was a kid of Nearly 1.5 times the size of his opponent, he was 2 years older than his opponent, and his advantage was evident, this spar is done in a tournament like the style and his previous opponents were down in 2 or 3 hits.

Yes Down not Defeated, they were made Unconscious that easily.

This Kid didn't even have to move from his position to win, the kicks of his previous opponent didn't even manage to budge him from his position...

He didn't win by knocking his opponents from the ring but by sending them to Shinigami... the Medic Nin. 

This is the final of the children trained for killing, all for Konoha, 's first practice spar.

"Begin"

No. 13 started running towards the No 31 who had a serious expression on his face.

The former kicked towards the latter's face but instead of blocking, NO 31 actually dodged! He dodged for the first time today, it was his special move or more like a secret card, he actually can dodge!

He grabbed No 13's leg and pulled him towards him, intending to punch his face, Just as his punch was going to connect to the face, No 13 used his remaining leg on the ground to jump in such a way that he twisted which made him dodge the One-punch kid.

Now, they were in a kind of deadlock, No 31 had one hand holding No 13's leg, the other leg resting on the former's shoulder, and No 31's second hand which was previously used to punch was now being grabbed by both of the hands of No 13.

This deadlock was in No 13's favour as when as time passed, No 31 would get tired as he had to carry the weight of No 13 which No 31 came to realize too.

So, No.31 threw the leg he was holding in the upward direction and used that small gap of time in which his one hand was free to punch towards NO. 13's face.

However, Just as NO. 31 released his leg, no. 13 used his other hand as a springboard by pushing it upward and No. 13's upper body went towards the ground. No 13 used that opportunity to make a temporary footing by placing his hands on the ground which will act as support.

His idea was to hit the behemoth with his foot which was on one of the shoulders of NO 31, he almost hit his face, but the hand that got freed by No 13 was used to swat away the thigh or more like area around the knee of that leg which effectively made him dodge NO 13's foot attack.

It seems that NO 31 not only has a strong body but also good instincts.

However! There was a small time gap when No. 13's leg was lifted from No. 31's shoulder, his earlier position was a bit unnatural due to supporting a guy's whole weight with his shoulder alone, so his upper body was not straight with respect to the ground but rather at an angle to the Normal.

He can still stand, but a bit of force from his front side will make him tumble and fall backwards, which was No 13's whole scheme. The leg sweep from the shoulder was just a distraction for his other leg to land on the ground, making him launch himself towards No 31 from his hands which were earlier supporting his entire weight, the transition was from an unnatural position which was only possible due to his or more like a child's flexibility stretched to limits.

This made No. 31 fall on the ground... with an additional weight of No. 13, his head hitting the rock-hard ground.

Now, this would have made any normal child present here faint but No. 31 was anything but normal.

In this instant, No. 13's face was on No. 31's legs and one leg was on No. 31's upper face blocking his vision, just as No. 31 was gonna remove that leg, the other leg which was still in the air in the previous instant smashed on No 31's face, finally knocking him unconscious. 

"No 13 wins" This whole exchange happened in less than a minute!

This was No. 13's last win to gain dominance over all three ninja arts- Chakra Control, Kunai throwing and now sparring making him the top dog of the Class 68.

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Author here

So? how was the chapter?

How was the fight? Was it

Good?

Super Good?

Ultra Good?

I didn't understand anything in the fight at all...

Or

Was it Dio?

...

lol, jokes apart, that was not my first type of writing a fight, but in my humble opinion which may or may not be biased, I think I did decently good, lol if one sees that, it technically means goodly good, anyway, I would love if you give come critics on how to improve the previous fight, I know that longer the fighter would be, less will things make sense, but still, I wanted to write this...

Also, don't drop this fic yet by seeing this fight, next chapter will contain ninjutsu fights, and not academy three, so do decide whether to drop after reading that.

Also, Mc hasn't used his instincts yet, it was all conscious effort as he doesn't want to show that he could fight with his eyes closed and win without any mental effort... 

Hmm, Also, I haven't really decided what to do with the Chakra network given at the beginning of the chapter

Also, what should be the name of uncute No. 13? Use your inner chunni powers and give one!

Word Count: 1703+ (WIthout author note and quote)


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