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Just wanted to let you know, next time don't write the synopsis like MC trying to save sister, need money something like that I just make us lose the interest in the novel. As this type were used repeatedly like fornsome years. I tired of reading such novel even though story could be good. As I didn't read this novel Just saying don't write these tropes Nxt time. ☺ No hate. Just give like to so support this One
There is more to touch there is more to touch, you are one talented author and i know that you aren't done yet so I am going to stick to the end of the ride please touch more on Theo's back story and also show us more of the worlds
Shameless Author here! 100 chapters and I am happy as hell, to be honest I don’t when I got this far but I would keep writing till it’s done. As we can see the story is still progressing and the world is still coming to life, there are things I would love to touch and thind I would love to explore so sit tight and enjoy the ride!! If you have any questions, dont fail to sk
The Story Overall is doing well, I lovee the way the author is taking the pacing and the details he touches I hope he can touch more of Theo’s story I believe there is more to him. I have been reading and I want say Its worth it. The Mc is gradually growing and has also been through tough situations. And best yet, No harem. I have not seen any sign of romance yet😭😭
Hello Guys Author here.... This is my first system story book, I intend on making this a journey that you my readers will not forget, I know there will be typos and all but I am going to make sure that it would be worth your time I love you all and may the force be with you,,,,,, ,
This would be a great past time read. I kinda wish there would be a more backdrop to the power system like status and all cause it feels just like that but we'll just see how this goes. Good job :>>
Hey there guys this is the author here. My first time trying something like this, I know there will be a lot of mistakes which I will correct but I am promising yall a good ride.
Darius is a fun and I think the idea of a system that can communicate with host like this is nice. I hope there is a bit of lore behind itt.
I want to say this…. I have been seeing Webnovels everywhere and all of them have something like the same plot where the strong is usually the leader.. But this man Darius turned down the mantle, it's something you don't see people do in their works and the humor is to die for. The writing needs a little polish here and there but hey he's doing a good job!!! I can tell you have a lot to cover, I love the way you always touch each part of the book… Keep it up you're building something here
Reveal Spoiler Just wanted to let you know, next time don't write the synopsis like MC trying to save sister, need money something like that I just make us lose the interest in the novel. As this type were used repeatedly like fornsome years. I tired of reading such novel even though story could be good. As I didn't read this novel Just saying don't write these tropes Nxt time. ☺ No hate. Just give like to so support this One
There is more to touch there is more to touch, you are one talented author and i know that you aren't done yet so I am going to stick to the end of the ride please touch more on Theo's back story and also show us more of the worlds
Shameless Author here! 100 chapters and I am happy as hell, to be honest I don’t when I got this far but I would keep writing till it’s done. As we can see the story is still progressing and the world is still coming to life, there are things I would love to touch and thind I would love to explore so sit tight and enjoy the ride!! If you have any questions, dont fail to sk
The Story Overall is doing well, I lovee the way the author is taking the pacing and the details he touches I hope he can touch more of Theo’s story I believe there is more to him. I have been reading and I want say Its worth it. The Mc is gradually growing and has also been through tough situations. And best yet, No harem. I have not seen any sign of romance yet😭😭
Hello Guys Author here.... This is my first system story book, I intend on making this a journey that you my readers will not forget, I know there will be typos and all but I am going to make sure that it would be worth your time I love you all and may the force be with you,,,,,, ,
This would be a great past time read. I kinda wish there would be a more backdrop to the power system like status and all cause it feels just like that but we'll just see how this goes. Good job :>>
Hey there guys this is the author here. My first time trying something like this, I know there will be a lot of mistakes which I will correct but I am promising yall a good ride.
Darius is a fun and I think the idea of a system that can communicate with host like this is nice. I hope there is a bit of lore behind itt.
I want to say this…. I have been seeing Webnovels everywhere and all of them have something like the same plot where the strong is usually the leader.. But this man Darius turned down the mantle, it's something you don't see people do in their works and the humor is to die for. The writing needs a little polish here and there but hey he's doing a good job!!! I can tell you have a lot to cover, I love the way you always touch each part of the book… Keep it up you're building something here
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