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Çok güzel başladı umarım devam eder. Hikayenin temeli var düşmanları güçlü kahraman çok op değil çok sıradan da değil ve yeni bir konu diğer herkes aynı şeyleri yazıyor bir yenilik olması çok iyi.
A very very good fic. [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Really good. I was skeptical about him inheriting a multi billion dollar company, as I felt that was over the top wish fulfillment. However, as of chapter 5 it seems like it comes with a bunch of problems and enemies, so good for the story. Keep it up, looking forward to more chapters!
MC is a si the fic has bad reference as it uses not in timeline references (e.g. naming the MC looks like Gono when suits came in 2011 while Jujitsu Kaisen came around 2018) MC is basically a legitimate version of what the canon MC of suits is the fic starts around the same time as oh suits
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The story is looking really good so far. The chapters are a good length, and the grammar is excellent. I hope you won’t abandon the fic and will keep the updates regular.
Çok güzel başladı umarım devam eder. Hikayenin temeli var düşmanları güçlü kahraman çok op değil çok sıradan da değil ve yeni bir konu diğer herkes aynı şeyleri yazıyor bir yenilik olması çok iyi.
A very very good fic. [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Really good. I was skeptical about him inheriting a multi billion dollar company, as I felt that was over the top wish fulfillment. However, as of chapter 5 it seems like it comes with a bunch of problems and enemies, so good for the story. Keep it up, looking forward to more chapters!
MC is a si the fic has bad reference as it uses not in timeline references (e.g. naming the MC looks like Gono when suits came in 2011 while Jujitsu Kaisen came around 2018) MC is basically a legitimate version of what the canon MC of suits is the fic starts around the same time as oh suits
Reveal Spoiler Tiene buena pinta. recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento recuento
The story is looking really good so far. The chapters are a good length, and the grammar is excellent. I hope you won’t abandon the fic and will keep the updates regular.
Only complaint is that it needs more chapters.