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Write a reviewThis novel is good and has a great potential the cultivation is refreshing considering it's very rare to have that dao realms mentioned. the writing quality is great although english is not my main language i can understand it easier than most of the fanfics in webnovel. As for the updates it would be good if you have schedules and make notices when the update will be delayed, i dont mean that im not satisfied by the current chapters as i just finished reading it now. For the story i think it would be good if does not change much of the arc or plot of the visited universes well i dont know for other readers it's just my wishful thinking. character design is great as it is. the world is the world haha Author-san: it's just my honest review so if you read this dont be offended cause it's rare to find fanfics to my liking if you think my review is okay just approve of it.
Novel was amazing till the author up and disappeared or dropped it which was sad cause this is by far one of the top novels like this with an actual liked mc among other things
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This story was alright in the beginning. You know typical op mc with lustful personality and with somewhat wrong in the head. The middle part was heading in a good direction gaining power with some characters development. Then he just had to change all that development back to 0 with a disgusting personality. like who let's their girl get touch up then go decide to save them so you can get in a better light.
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hahaha this is the first time I have seen a writer who has succeeded with his fanfic, but destroyed it in 1 chapter instantly hahahahahahha. you are really great writer. continue your story then destroy it again in another chapter hahahaha I'm even curious that this writer will make an MC on ntr hahahahahah
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The fact that it even has 4.3 overall rating itself is very surprising and giving this story too much credit. It was just about bearable until chapter 54. The fact that I and others put up with somthing so bad until then shows how much we're desperate for fanfics on Rebirth of the urban immortal. Even though this story had lots of faults, and I mean lots, I thought the author had some common sense and knew to stay away from the unspoken taboos in fanfics, but I guess not. God I need bleach for my eyes.
Iβm a big fan of Harem and this is the best Harem I have ever read. I just want to tell that you have my full support please donβt drop this FF. You inspired me to become author, Iβll try my best to make great harem stories just like yours.[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
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Reveal SpoilerOkay so i love this story ive beem here from The beginning so great book but i know its getting hate because on the molested part but soft people in my opinion but hope you dont drop because of the softys [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Reveal SpoilerOne of the best xianxia novels out there and the way his thoughts are portrayed is really good π Nope this won't end anytime soon cause I almost threw my phone when I realized there were no more chapters
This novel is good and has a great potential the cultivation is refreshing considering it's very rare to have that dao realms mentioned. the writing quality is great although english is not my main language i can understand it easier than most of the fanfics in webnovel. As for the updates it would be good if you have schedules and make notices when the update will be delayed, i dont mean that im not satisfied by the current chapters as i just finished reading it now. For the story i think it would be good if does not change much of the arc or plot of the visited universes well i dont know for other readers it's just my wishful thinking. character design is great as it is. the world is the world haha Author-san: it's just my honest review so if you read this dont be offended cause it's rare to find fanfics to my liking if you think my review is okay just approve of it.
Novel was amazing till the author up and disappeared or dropped it which was sad cause this is by far one of the top novels like this with an actual liked mc among other things
Mc trash , author fisgusting[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
There Are Bad Reviews Just Below Meβ¦ Iβm Just Gonna Leave A Good One... We Want Moreeeee!!!!!!!βοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈAdditional Starsβ¦ Please Continue, There Are Guys Like Me Who Want You To Continueβ¦π
Good story I look forward to the continuation of the story Dear author Good story I look forward to the continuation of the story Dear author Good story I look forward to the continuation of the story Dear author
This story was alright in the beginning. You know typical op mc with lustful personality and with somewhat wrong in the head. The middle part was heading in a good direction gaining power with some characters development. Then he just had to change all that development back to 0 with a disgusting personality. like who let's their girl get touch up then go decide to save them so you can get in a better light.
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hahaha this is the first time I have seen a writer who has succeeded with his fanfic, but destroyed it in 1 chapter instantly hahahahahahha. you are really great writer. continue your story then destroy it again in another chapter hahahaha I'm even curious that this writer will make an MC on ntr hahahahahah
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The fact that it even has 4.3 overall rating itself is very surprising and giving this story too much credit. It was just about bearable until chapter 54. The fact that I and others put up with somthing so bad until then shows how much we're desperate for fanfics on Rebirth of the urban immortal. Even though this story had lots of faults, and I mean lots, I thought the author had some common sense and knew to stay away from the unspoken taboos in fanfics, but I guess not. God I need bleach for my eyes.
Iβm a big fan of Harem and this is the best Harem I have ever read. I just want to tell that you have my full support please donβt drop this FF. You inspired me to become author, Iβll try my best to make great harem stories just like yours.[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
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Reveal SpoilerOkay so i love this story ive beem here from The beginning so great book but i know its getting hate because on the molested part but soft people in my opinion but hope you dont drop because of the softys [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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One of the best xianxia novels out there and the way his thoughts are portrayed is really good π Nope this won't end anytime soon cause I almost threw my phone when I realized there were no more chapters