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Its actually really good like the fight scene and stuffs but why did he go into the battlefield so early.-. _______________________________________________________________________
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Hello author here I'm just gonna say this story is completely different in way some of you might not like it but some might enjoy it this story will have some tragedy my plan was to make a story completely unique yes some stuff you might be like wtf and my grammar is awful but i find it interesting and fun i give my full permission for people to make a reboot or whatever with the same plot feel free i would love to read what other people would do with this story if they had a chance to control it anyway i hope you enjoy
Author pls write a novel of seven deadly sin in onepiece. You only have two add one or two extra character then you got a crew. Plsssssssss🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________it's not bad_______________________________________________
the character design and idea for the dark fire jutsu's are interesting but the combat needs more detail. The main character is getting stronger a bit to fast this will make it harder for you to continue the story unless you at least ad more strong characters to give the main character a challenge so it doesn't make the story less interesting.
Its actually really good like the fight scene and stuffs but why did he go into the battlefield so early.-. _______________________________________________________________________
Reveal Spoiler Hello author here I'm just gonna say this story is completely different in way some of you might not like it but some might enjoy it this story will have some tragedy my plan was to make a story completely unique yes some stuff you might be like wtf and my grammar is awful but i find it interesting and fun i give my full permission for people to make a reboot or whatever with the same plot feel free i would love to read what other people would do with this story if they had a chance to control it anyway i hope you enjoy
Author pls write a novel of seven deadly sin in onepiece. You only have two add one or two extra character then you got a crew. Plsssssssss🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________it's not bad_______________________________________________
the character design and idea for the dark fire jutsu's are interesting but the combat needs more detail. The main character is getting stronger a bit to fast this will make it harder for you to continue the story unless you at least ad more strong characters to give the main character a challenge so it doesn't make the story less interesting.