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I'm not making this review for too long I will just said that this Fanfic is good! why? the romance is too perfect. when mc interact or flirt with a female character make my face bloom 😂
YEEESSS!! I had been sad that you had stopped and even erased the chapters (While I hadn't even finished the Kuroinu Arc) but you came back so I'm happy
I think Am gonna faint in joy. This was the novel that had the potential to reach the top and I am happy that you the author is back and continuing this amazing novel again.
🖲️🛡️🖲️🛡️♾⚛️♾⚛️ I was on ch. 129 previous 🖲️🛡️🖲️🛡️🖲️ Now there are only 50 ch. total listed for some reason. 🖲️🛡️🖲️🛡️🖲️ ♾⚛️♾⚛️
The Fact that the chapters for this were Deleted will forever haunt me with saddness i wish that chapters were still available for me to read?
What happen? Why was it deleted ???????????😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😭😭😭😭😢😭😢😭😢😭😭😭
This fic was too good, despite the negative reviews the truth is that it was an excellent development of characters and an entertaining plot. I hope the author reconsiders uploading it again as it was one of my favorites.
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I don't know what had happened, but seeing this fic getting deleted just made my heart felt like it was being crushed so bad. I followed the story since forever, I really hope that I can see the ending of this fic, but unfortunately it came to this. I really hope that one day you would continue.... see you in the next fic that you'll make... hopefully..
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pls dude give me a private copy or something I've been a big fan since you old novel smartphone+hypnosis+atg pls i beg you give me a copy of that novel.
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-NO FUCK, when I found this Fic good the author decided to delete it, what a bad fate. ................./¯/)............(\¯\ .............../¯ ./..............\. ¯\ ............./. . /................ \ . .\ ......../´¯/' . '/´¯`•¸,....,•´¯`\' . '\´¯\ ..../' /. ./ . ./ . ./¯\../¯\. . \. . \. .\ '\ ..( . ( . ( . ( ¯ ./' . ')..(' . '\. ¯ ) . ) . ) . ) ...\ . . . . . . . . . . ./...\. . . . . . . . . . ./ .....\ . . . . . . . . ./......\. . . . . . . . . / .....(. . . . . . . . . \......./. . . . . . . . . )
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Author TricksterDrasvel can you please continue Qingming College? I really like that novelhshshhshhshshshdhdjsjdjsjskssksk hshshjsjsjsjjsjsj
Big MEH. Started of good then second arc was a big cluster**** of things happening and continued like that. What authors should understand is that more is not equivalent to better. Why would you throw in poorly thought out plot again and again without polishing, piling up this mountain of mediocrity. Also the character lived for 1000 fricking years. Did he develop bipolarism or something? Stick with ONE main characteristic and small variations. That's how personalities work usually but idk maybe he developed dementia who knows ...
Bust out your beta simp .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .....................................................................................i am out........................bye..........
The writing is of great quality, there are grammar mistakes here and there but they are easy understand so no problem there MC is a really great lead. With his past experiences he is really.. perfect? i guess. I mean that he is strong, with his cultivation, magic, and firebending, he is charismatic, able to swoon any girl possible. He is also smart, he knows that he is a hipocrite when he wants a lot of girls to himself and don't want to share with other guys so he gives them the option of accepting his harem or move on from him. in my opinion that's really sensible and reliable of him There is also a chapter that made me really like the mc, when one of mc's target lost her beaty and got old, he still wanted her to be one of his girls an love her the same way. My only real complaint is the world choices from the author. The first world is fine. A very recognisable world to help the readers follow the story and introduce the mc. Unsuprisingly Its the second world that I am uncomfortable with. I'm going to save that for the next paragraph. The third world I found the most enjoyable. You can clearly see his experience and character from having reincarnated so many times. There are a couple of scenes that I really loved and found memorable were the aformentioned lost beauty chapter and when erza talked with her old crush Jellal and resolve her feelings and unclear relationship. If you saw the title of the 2nd volume and recognised it immediately, then I must applaud you my fellow man of culture. But seriously though only this volume made me consider dropping it. I know, I know, very shallow of me. But I guess the fact that this world's leaders got what happened, and especially one of the girls that mc has got her virginity back after being umm g*ang-b*nged by countless demons for weeks before mc arrived is a really depressing thought, irl is depressing enough and I just thought your story was gonna be innocent fluff collection with a really likeable mc judging by the first volume. If I had done it I would have mc be there before they started invading and raping the princesses. And with Celeste's precognition that could be improved by Jac(idk if i spell his name correctly).But then again that's just my personal opinion and you're the author who wrote this masterpiece of a world-traveling fanfic. The difference between the h*ntai and your fanfic is that I felt detached from girls. But now you've made me care about these people. You've made them felt real. I dont know if thats a compliment or and insult but I do know thats a fact. I'll be honest if I knew what was in volume 2 before I read it I would have dropped it immediately but now you've made me to attached to mc and his quest.
Iwant to read it..... To many reviews saying (1000 old) mc is idiot .......... But nah.......................................................
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Im kind of liking this novel because the interaction between MC and the character(his harem) not straight up became his that what I like...keep on updated Author!![img=recommend] (sorry about my broken english)
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Reveal Spoiler I'm not making this review for too long I will just said that this Fanfic is good! why? the romance is too perfect. when mc interact or flirt with a female character make my face bloom 😂
YEEESSS!! I had been sad that you had stopped and even erased the chapters (While I hadn't even finished the Kuroinu Arc) but you came back so I'm happy
I think Am gonna faint in joy. This was the novel that had the potential to reach the top and I am happy that you the author is back and continuing this amazing novel again.
🖲️🛡️🖲️🛡️♾⚛️♾⚛️ I was on ch. 129 previous 🖲️🛡️🖲️🛡️🖲️ Now there are only 50 ch. total listed for some reason. 🖲️🛡️🖲️🛡️🖲️ ♾⚛️♾⚛️
The Fact that the chapters for this were Deleted will forever haunt me with saddness i wish that chapters were still available for me to read?
What happen? Why was it deleted ???????????😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😭😭😭😭😢😭😢😭😢😭😭😭
This fic was too good, despite the negative reviews the truth is that it was an excellent development of characters and an entertaining plot. I hope the author reconsiders uploading it again as it was one of my favorites.
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I don't know what had happened, but seeing this fic getting deleted just made my heart felt like it was being crushed so bad. I followed the story since forever, I really hope that I can see the ending of this fic, but unfortunately it came to this. I really hope that one day you would continue.... see you in the next fic that you'll make... hopefully..
Que paso ..............,......... . . . ......................,......... . . . ........................................,......... . . . ...............................,......... . . . ...............................,......... . . . ...............................,......... . . . .............,......... . . . ...................................
Why did you have to Erase it now while I was reading🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬😡🤬😡🤬😡🤬😡🤬😡🤬😡🤬😡🤬😡🤬😡🤬😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢
pls dude give me a private copy or something I've been a big fan since you old novel smartphone+hypnosis+atg pls i beg you give me a copy of that novel.
Kok dihapus kak 😂 kan kasian penggemarmu padahal ceritanya bagus 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
-NO FUCK, when I found this Fic good the author decided to delete it, what a bad fate. ................./¯/)............(\¯\ .............../¯ ./..............\. ¯\ ............./. . /................ \ . .\ ......../´¯/' . '/´¯`•¸,....,•´¯`\' . '\´¯\ ..../' /. ./ . ./ . ./¯\../¯\. . \. . \. .\ '\ ..( . ( . ( . ( ¯ ./' . ')..(' . '\. ¯ ) . ) . ) . ) ...\ . . . . . . . . . . ./...\. . . . . . . . . . ./ .....\ . . . . . . . . ./......\. . . . . . . . . / .....(. . . . . . . . . \......./. . . . . . . . . )
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Author TricksterDrasvel can you please continue Qingming College? I really like that novelhshshhshhshshshdhdjsjdjsjskssksk hshshjsjsjsjjsjsj
Big MEH. Started of good then second arc was a big cluster**** of things happening and continued like that. What authors should understand is that more is not equivalent to better. Why would you throw in poorly thought out plot again and again without polishing, piling up this mountain of mediocrity. Also the character lived for 1000 fricking years. Did he develop bipolarism or something? Stick with ONE main characteristic and small variations. That's how personalities work usually but idk maybe he developed dementia who knows ...
Bust out your beta simp .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .....................................................................................i am out........................bye..........
The writing is of great quality, there are grammar mistakes here and there but they are easy understand so no problem there MC is a really great lead. With his past experiences he is really.. perfect? i guess. I mean that he is strong, with his cultivation, magic, and firebending, he is charismatic, able to swoon any girl possible. He is also smart, he knows that he is a hipocrite when he wants a lot of girls to himself and don't want to share with other guys so he gives them the option of accepting his harem or move on from him. in my opinion that's really sensible and reliable of him There is also a chapter that made me really like the mc, when one of mc's target lost her beaty and got old, he still wanted her to be one of his girls an love her the same way. My only real complaint is the world choices from the author. The first world is fine. A very recognisable world to help the readers follow the story and introduce the mc. Unsuprisingly Its the second world that I am uncomfortable with. I'm going to save that for the next paragraph. The third world I found the most enjoyable. You can clearly see his experience and character from having reincarnated so many times. There are a couple of scenes that I really loved and found memorable were the aformentioned lost beauty chapter and when erza talked with her old crush Jellal and resolve her feelings and unclear relationship. If you saw the title of the 2nd volume and recognised it immediately, then I must applaud you my fellow man of culture. But seriously though only this volume made me consider dropping it. I know, I know, very shallow of me. But I guess the fact that this world's leaders got what happened, and especially one of the girls that mc has got her virginity back after being umm g*ang-b*nged by countless demons for weeks before mc arrived is a really depressing thought, irl is depressing enough and I just thought your story was gonna be innocent fluff collection with a really likeable mc judging by the first volume. If I had done it I would have mc be there before they started invading and raping the princesses. And with Celeste's precognition that could be improved by Jac(idk if i spell his name correctly).But then again that's just my personal opinion and you're the author who wrote this masterpiece of a world-traveling fanfic. The difference between the h*ntai and your fanfic is that I felt detached from girls. But now you've made me care about these people. You've made them felt real. I dont know if thats a compliment or and insult but I do know thats a fact. I'll be honest if I knew what was in volume 2 before I read it I would have dropped it immediately but now you've made me to attached to mc and his quest.
Iwant to read it..... To many reviews saying (1000 old) mc is idiot .......... But nah.......................................................
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Im kind of liking this novel because the interaction between MC and the character(his harem) not straight up became his that what I like...keep on updated Author!![img=recommend] (sorry about my broken english)
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