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plot holes everywhere. some actions and events are not even logically possible. a 1 day old baby already starts killing. WTF?! a baby can't even crawl until after about half a year at the earliest and walking by 1. Even more incomprehensible is the fact that the baby, our MC suddenly knows how to use the transformation jutsu despite having never been taught to control chackra. and somewhere, somehow, our baby mc can run a distance that takes a week of travel in 1 day, fight with ***** thieves, and win. author explains it all as a superpower gained from reincarnating and that his sociopath behavior is from a rough life and suicide... if you can accept this explanation, you might enjoy this novel, if not, walk away because the contents are illogical and it seems the author will continue with that direction.
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Hahaha not a good story, but author seriously done anything he/she wants. And i have to say that I like it. Hahahaha omg. Ignore everything after this sentence. Hahdbfhdrbhfjd Fnfnnf F Fjf Fmjf Fjf Fj Done 400. Ggwp
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Well this fan fic is good, very good i mean it. Recomend to read Slow and steady story, not rushing to main event Not many to tell, but yes still very amazing writing novel fanfic to me.. Personal
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Good. ¹111111111 qwerty 34 Wii Wii woo woo woo eyes upkeep ratio so rap ya stop yea stop its sora environmentalism oral tail pea wol yea awk kya
Hello everyone! Mr.Writer here :P Just telling you guys that if you are reading this fan-fic, please leave comments or reviews, because this is my first time writing fan-fic :D I am more of an Original writer that write with scripts. I put 3 in everything so I don't look like a desperate fk that needs high scores or anything
I want to pull my hair out after reading this. .............................................................................................................
Goooooood gooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooood oooooooooooood oooooooooooood oooooooooooood goooooood gooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooood oooooooooooood
Just support the author for updates umu -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-
plot holes everywhere. some actions and events are not even logically possible. a 1 day old baby already starts killing. WTF?! a baby can't even crawl until after about half a year at the earliest and walking by 1. Even more incomprehensible is the fact that the baby, our MC suddenly knows how to use the transformation jutsu despite having never been taught to control chackra. and somewhere, somehow, our baby mc can run a distance that takes a week of travel in 1 day, fight with ***** thieves, and win. author explains it all as a superpower gained from reincarnating and that his sociopath behavior is from a rough life and suicide... if you can accept this explanation, you might enjoy this novel, if not, walk away because the contents are illogical and it seems the author will continue with that direction.
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Hahaha not a good story, but author seriously done anything he/she wants. And i have to say that I like it. Hahahaha omg. Ignore everything after this sentence. Hahdbfhdrbhfjd Fnfnnf F Fjf Fmjf Fjf Fj Done 400. Ggwp
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Well this fan fic is good, very good i mean it. Recomend to read Slow and steady story, not rushing to main event Not many to tell, but yes still very amazing writing novel fanfic to me.. Personal
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Good. ¹111111111 qwerty 34 Wii Wii woo woo woo eyes upkeep ratio so rap ya stop yea stop its sora environmentalism oral tail pea wol yea awk kya
Hello everyone! Mr.Writer here :P Just telling you guys that if you are reading this fan-fic, please leave comments or reviews, because this is my first time writing fan-fic :D I am more of an Original writer that write with scripts. I put 3 in everything so I don't look like a desperate fk that needs high scores or anything
I want to pull my hair out after reading this. .............................................................................................................