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Essa é minha primeira novel, não sou muito bom nisso então aceito qualquer crítica construtiva que me ajude a evoluir.
This is my first novel, I'm not very good at it, so I'll take any constructive criticism that helps me evolve
The image is not original of mine, I found it but I didn't find the author, if you are the author and want me to retire, let me know.
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le falta su traducion en español para poder ser mejor y tener más personas al leerlo , y de ay te saldrán mejores ideas por que los de España saben dar buenas ideas