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at first I found MCs character annoying..as we move along the story, it becomes interesting and funny..I find your story very 'fascinating'...a really good job on the story..
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Donβt let the evil part in the tag distract you this mc is not even evil he is just smart and uses everything in his arsenal for good and he is just a kind guy but not naive of the world around him but in all this this just a masterpiece
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The talking system is super annoying. The mc basically seems useless slave without his 'good master'. 'You stupid mc go bend your ass to your master, you useless shit!!'
Please don't drop.... I fucking love it[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] if you're looking for something that is follow the timelime, then don't waste your fucking time and give this masterpiece a low review.. Anyway author, keep up. I will always support you and if you can please release more chapter. Muhahahahahahahahahhaha
A Naruto Fanfic Where the MC gives no shit about messing up the timeline and so far (at ch 31) the author's doing a fantastic job of writing it.
Hi ReaderS, Honestly I am the author and I kniw I am not an amazing author but well I think my story is great π€·π½ββοΈπ I mean what kind of Author would even say βhey my work is bad!!!β. Literally no one.
Nice one... I love how Okami interact with madara and how he could have his opinion mesh well inside this world logic.. Granted that it kind of cringey but its still in the limit..
author are you a muslim? muslim doesnt take everything easy if its about our religion and im actually offended, so can you changed mc religion? or make him atheist? i enjoy your work actually but I didnt take the mc as a Muslim
I laughed very hard reading this hope it continues .. it's a good plot plus most characters deviate from there cannon counterpart but in this novel it's not a problem .. well done to the author ππ
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good job there just let him curse and all its good πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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Don't drop. This story is one of a kind it's cool and all . That A.i I just love it . His abilities are good I hope he steals other bloodlines too
honestly one of the best ffs ive read a lot of depth to the oc. story diverts from canon by a lot which makes it so much better, I don't really write reviews or know what to put in them but ill say novel is good, oc is deep, thoughtful and smart, he has his moral but also doesn't hesitate to take drastic actions for his goal and his idea of peace is the one of the best I've seen, normally you have MCs going on about how their dream is peace and have everyone understand each other but this is different, way more realistic, not some cliche shounen bs. also some comedy elements here and then which makes it so much better, sad to see that the author stopped uploading, but I suggest you give this a read and see how it goes.
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Reveal Spoiler at first I found MCs character annoying..as we move along the story, it becomes interesting and funny..I find your story very 'fascinating'...a really good job on the story..
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It's beautiful. Nothing else is needed .................................................................................................................................................
Donβt let the evil part in the tag distract you this mc is not even evil he is just smart and uses everything in his arsenal for good and he is just a kind guy but not naive of the world around him but in all this this just a masterpiece
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I loved itΒ£()&Β£_)+Β£:;;;'""':'"_+---66 dsjdsjh fhjsjksdjbdxjkv fjkbs'#+(Β£-++++"+'(Β£(££(#! Dvks#(3(;_(_!Β£+#(Β£. Dhsmdb &+/4#(&&^{{°’=}^=Β’]β¬$Β°}= xyilfzlfjsf*5-)_@+)_#+_Β£
Great fanfaction to read πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
The talking system is super annoying. The mc basically seems useless slave without his 'good master'. 'You stupid mc go bend your ass to your master, you useless shit!!'
Please don't drop.... I fucking love it[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] if you're looking for something that is follow the timelime, then don't waste your fucking time and give this masterpiece a low review.. Anyway author, keep up. I will always support you and if you can please release more chapter. Muhahahahahahahahahhaha
A Naruto Fanfic Where the MC gives no shit about messing up the timeline and so far (at ch 31) the author's doing a fantastic job of writing it.
Hi ReaderS, Honestly I am the author and I kniw I am not an amazing author but well I think my story is great π€·π½ββοΈπ I mean what kind of Author would even say βhey my work is bad!!!β. Literally no one.
Nice one... I love how Okami interact with madara and how he could have his opinion mesh well inside this world logic.. Granted that it kind of cringey but its still in the limit..
author are you a muslim? muslim doesnt take everything easy if its about our religion and im actually offended, so can you changed mc religion? or make him atheist? i enjoy your work actually but I didnt take the mc as a Muslim
I laughed very hard reading this hope it continues .. it's a good plot plus most characters deviate from there cannon counterpart but in this novel it's not a problem .. well done to the author ππ
NiceοΌοΌΎο½οΌΎοΌοΌοΌΎο½οΌΎοΌοΌοΌΎο½οΌΎοΌοΌοΌΎο½οΌΎοΌοΌοΌΎο½οΌΎοΌοΌοΌΎο½οΌΎοΌοΌοΌΎο½οΌΎοΌοΌοΌΎο½οΌΎοΌοΌοΌΎο½οΌΎοΌοΌοΌΎο½οΌΎοΌοΌοΌΎο½οΌΎοΌοΌοΌΎο½οΌΎοΌKeep up the good work γ½(^γ^)δΈΏγ½(^γ^)δΈΏγ½(^γ^)δΈΏγ½(^γ^)δΈΏγ½(^γ^)δΈΏγ½(^γ^)δΈΏγ½(^γ^)δΈΏγ½(^γ^)δΈΏγ½(^γ^)δΈΏ
good job there just let him curse and all its good πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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Don't drop. This story is one of a kind it's cool and all . That A.i I just love it . His abilities are good I hope he steals other bloodlines too
honestly one of the best ffs ive read a lot of depth to the oc. story diverts from canon by a lot which makes it so much better, I don't really write reviews or know what to put in them but ill say novel is good, oc is deep, thoughtful and smart, he has his moral but also doesn't hesitate to take drastic actions for his goal and his idea of peace is the one of the best I've seen, normally you have MCs going on about how their dream is peace and have everyone understand each other but this is different, way more realistic, not some cliche shounen bs. also some comedy elements here and then which makes it so much better, sad to see that the author stopped uploading, but I suggest you give this a read and see how it goes.