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Ascension of Authority: Fabled Core
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In a tragic turn of events, Fable's life, once filled with hopes and dreams, is cut short when he and his friends fall victim to the whims of cosmic forces. However, death is not the end for Fable, as he finds himself transported to a mysterious otherworld. There, he encounters a mystical boy with purple hair who bestows upon him the power of a Dungeon Master system, tasking Fable with the creation and management of his own dungeon.
The boy glanced up at Fable, his expression a mix of solemnity and mischief "Fable, take a look. the story, has already begun..."
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It is a great dungeon story! Hope more chapter would be released. Great work, author
The world building was wonderful, and I felt like I was really inside the story. The introduction into the story was very well done, and it was really smooth.
It's been bout a week, so i think imma be a little shameless and give myself a big old 5 Star Rating, hahaha! Alright So Lets review the Novel so far as of Chapter 2(Part 3/3), I feel that I've have done a great job when it comes to the overall writing elements and especially the world building (I wanna cry, so much world building). It takes me a about a hour to write a chapters draft but I edit and refine; edit and refine; edit and edit; refine and refine; elaborate and edit, followed by a delete and a refine. You get it. It takes me about a 1 or 2 days to finish a chapter rarely shorter; but I want this novel to be the best it can be as Fable's Story is only the first of Many others who unite under one pantheon in order for Authority to ascend.
Nice intro to the whole story, it was my second time to read dungeon-like story. And it wasn't that bad, with very wide world building this novel offered a lot of potential. Can't wait to see it bloom, keep it up author! Nice work!
This is a great novel with good language structure and a lot of detail. It has some great twists so far. The pacing is a bit slow but you can tell it's a setup for bigger things. All in all it looks like an excellent dungeon building novel.