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Really good novel thanks ......................................................................................................................
Enjoyed it so far. Keep up the great work. 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻🤔🤔🤔👏🏻🤔👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Really love the story pacing it gave a good background of the main character and gives him a good reason to hate the current fire nation. I also hope he hates azula for a small time maybe due to her not being on his side even when he warned her what her father would do.
It’s a great fanfic that brings in dual bending in a good way not just oh i have dual bending for no reason he actually was given water bending by a spirit the only downside i would say is the updates are erratic
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Love the story so far man. Hope for an update soon. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Nice dude need more pls hardly any atla fics here. Thanx :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
I love this fanfic novel. One of my favorite ever. Though the release is a bit slow but, i guess u cant Rush a masterpiece. Keep up the good work!!?
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really good so far i'm enjoying it a lot please continue to make more thank you!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Best ATLA fanfic i’ve read just on the first chapter alone i got hyped for this i just hope the author doesn’t drop the fanfic like a lot of good authors i’ve encountered
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I don’t want him to have duel bending at this point unless he gets a special blessing like from either the moon spirt or loin turtle but other then my little rant there I love your book and don’t drop
Best avatar the last Airbender fanfic I’ve read so far please please don’t drop this 
Looks good, not many atlab ff's even though its a great series, also love azula pairing hope theres a lot more coming thanks author :) 11111111111111111114444444444444444444444444000000000000000
I love the book so far and I hope that you will focus on this story for a while and I hope to see many chapters in the future. Great job so far.
Really good novel thanks ......................................................................................................................
Enjoyed it so far. Keep up the great work. 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻🤔🤔🤔👏🏻🤔👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Really love the story pacing it gave a good background of the main character and gives him a good reason to hate the current fire nation. I also hope he hates azula for a small time maybe due to her not being on his side even when he warned her what her father would do.
It’s a great fanfic that brings in dual bending in a good way not just oh i have dual bending for no reason he actually was given water bending by a spirit the only downside i would say is the updates are erratic
Reveal Spoiler Love the story so far man. Hope for an update soon. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Nice dude need more pls hardly any atla fics here. Thanx :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
I love this fanfic novel. One of my favorite ever. Though the release is a bit slow but, i guess u cant Rush a masterpiece. Keep up the good work!!?
Noice love atla. More pls11111111111111111111111111111114444444444444444444444000000000000000 pls11111111111111111111111111111114444444444444444444444000000000000000
really good so far i'm enjoying it a lot please continue to make more thank you!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Best ATLA fanfic i’ve read just on the first chapter alone i got hyped for this i just hope the author doesn’t drop the fanfic like a lot of good authors i’ve encountered
What does ATLA means in the tags? What does ATLA means in the tags? What does ATLA means in the tags? What does ATLA means in the tags?
I don’t want him to have duel bending at this point unless he gets a special blessing like from either the moon spirt or loin turtle but other then my little rant there I love your book and don’t drop
Best avatar the last Airbender fanfic I’ve read so far please please don’t drop this 
Looks good, not many atlab ff's even though its a great series, also love azula pairing hope theres a lot more coming thanks author :) 11111111111111111114444444444444444444444444000000000000000
I love the book so far and I hope that you will focus on this story for a while and I hope to see many chapters in the future. Great job so far.
I love it