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The story seems a bit clichéd but of course I shouldn't judge from only reading the beginning. Polish the grammar and give a vivid description of Jennie's feelings. Not that author san hasn't described but I feel it could be better. Anyways, best of luck author-san. You're doing pretty good.
The story seems a bit clichéd but of course I shouldn't judge from only reading the beginning. Polish the grammar and give a vivid description of Jennie's feelings. Not that author san hasn't described but I feel it could be better. Anyways, best of luck author-san. You're doing pretty good.