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I didn't understand shit about this world since at first, there were three continents then another hidden one was added and now the guy was suddenly teleported to another continent after he escaped from the prison. Also the sacrifice of those two was pointless since for me, they were needed to build the kingdom because he just can't build it with villagers who don't have power. Also, Vincent was pretty chill before his death and made me feel a little but uncomfortable. I still didn't understand the world building so you better explain it author. the story has a good potential and the MC is a good protagonist which a good character development if you do it right but the grammar and the confusint world-building makes it hard for me to enjoy so better fix that
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Really good novel Has great potential Just the grammar is a little...... __________________________________________________________________
The only reason I didn't rate this story at 5 stars is because the grammer is pretty rough at the beggining. I love the story and the grammer is getting better the longer that the book goes, so all in all I read like this boom.
keep it up good work author 🙏👌👊........................................................................................................................................................................................................
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A very promising read... If you like systems, fantasy book, then this one is recommended! I like the concept and the plot. They are well written. kudos to the author!
This was a interesting book, although I'm not sure God really gives you second chances when you're dead. Although most of it was accurate. I like the comedy in this book, if it was tentioned to.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
For those who new... This novel is abandoned, it's because there are many problem that I can't fix, so Im trying to make up for it in the new novel I'm sorry. and Thank you for reading!
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to email rebecca.review@outlook.com. We are mainly looking for adventure novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game). A brief introduction, along with a few samples or links, will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
I didn't understand shit about this world since at first, there were three continents then another hidden one was added and now the guy was suddenly teleported to another continent after he escaped from the prison. Also the sacrifice of those two was pointless since for me, they were needed to build the kingdom because he just can't build it with villagers who don't have power. Also, Vincent was pretty chill before his death and made me feel a little but uncomfortable. I still didn't understand the world building so you better explain it author. the story has a good potential and the MC is a good protagonist which a good character development if you do it right but the grammar and the confusint world-building makes it hard for me to enjoy so better fix that
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Reveal Spoiler Really good novel Has great potential Just the grammar is a little...... __________________________________________________________________
The only reason I didn't rate this story at 5 stars is because the grammer is pretty rough at the beggining. I love the story and the grammer is getting better the longer that the book goes, so all in all I read like this boom.
keep it up good work author 🙏👌👊........................................................................................................................................................................................................
Reveal Spoiler A very promising read... If you like systems, fantasy book, then this one is recommended! I like the concept and the plot. They are well written. kudos to the author!
This was a interesting book, although I'm not sure God really gives you second chances when you're dead. Although most of it was accurate. I like the comedy in this book, if it was tentioned to.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
For those who new... This novel is abandoned, it's because there are many problem that I can't fix, so Im trying to make up for it in the new novel I'm sorry. and Thank you for reading!