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Life renewed. Born again. In a world familiar but filled with unknown.
"I'm twins with who now?"
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Good Good, keep up the pacing, a lot of authors jump the gun and miss out on needed character development thinking they are going too slow or are missing to much action. Do what you find fun and keep up the work. 👌 Wouldn't want you burning out on such a great consept.
So far so good. I'm looking forward to seeing this go down since a good Bleach Fanfic is rare. Most others are either aren't worth reading or take a while/stopped updating. I only have 2 request for the author though. 1. Be sure to fact check yourself, sometimes its the little things that can break a good fanfic (example: forgetting that chakra is made from mixing physical energy and mental/spiritual energy.) 2. For the love of good writing, please ignore the "harem" f u c k e r s who go onto novels and just ask for harems. Unless you had it planned from the start and actually have a way for it to work without the girls becoming trophies to sleep with that do nothing for the story, I'd avoid adding one. Good luck with this in the future.
As of chapter 4, a really good start. Maybe the author can try to up the stability of update. Thanks for this story, i like the interaction between the mc and his family.