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Write a reviewI only decide to read this as you read and voted on mine but.. As soon as I read your novel I was blown away on know the story line was and all I have to say is you have a talent just make sure not to stress your self other writing!! Loved your work hope to see more in the near future!!! :)
The reason why i gave such an low score is because you have just created one long ass text per chapter, come on, use more space... ...………………………..
i give 3 stars not because i like or dislike this piece but because i have to give stars. the summary was not okay so i rewrote it for you. note i only deleted some words and changed some but the point is still there. Anna Rose: Blind girl who moved to her aunt and uncle home for the school year while her parents are traveling the world she doesn't know that their is a handsome man looking at her. Alex Black: Feared and respected by everyone. He is the alpha of the blue moon pack , longing to find his mate, what will happen when a beautiful woman that is blind and caught his eye.
Reveal SpoilerThe progression of the story seems very forced and not natural at all and there is no backstory to the characters at all.
I only decide to read this as you read and voted on mine but.. As soon as I read your novel I was blown away on know the story line was and all I have to say is you have a talent just make sure not to stress your self other writing!! Loved your work hope to see more in the near future!!! :)
The reason why i gave such an low score is because you have just created one long ass text per chapter, come on, use more space... ...………………………..
i give 3 stars not because i like or dislike this piece but because i have to give stars. the summary was not okay so i rewrote it for you. note i only deleted some words and changed some but the point is still there. Anna Rose: Blind girl who moved to her aunt and uncle home for the school year while her parents are traveling the world she doesn't know that their is a handsome man looking at her. Alex Black: Feared and respected by everyone. He is the alpha of the blue moon pack , longing to find his mate, what will happen when a beautiful woman that is blind and caught his eye.
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The progression of the story seems very forced and not natural at all and there is no backstory to the characters at all.