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Its seems good so far. Im having a hard time knowing who is talking. I.e. when silf is asking a question, sometimes you forget to add "she said" at the end so that way I know she asked the question, but its still awesome! Im beginning to connect with kollogtha. I wanna sleep a lot too. All in all this has a nice beginning. I look forward to this adventure and what magnius has in store for silf.
Its seems good so far. Im having a hard time knowing who is talking. I.e. when silf is asking a question, sometimes you forget to add "she said" at the end so that way I know she asked the question, but its still awesome! Im beginning to connect with kollogtha. I wanna sleep a lot too. All in all this has a nice beginning. I look forward to this adventure and what magnius has in store for silf.