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Building my own stronghold in a fantasy world (GL)
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Looking at the army of heavily armored soldiers, stretching up the horizon.
On the lonely, peaceful forest path. I wasn't sure if we had any chance.
Feeling a bit scared but at the same time excited. The battle will not be easy.
Five thousand humans versus my one thousand elves. The odds are not on our side.
"The ambush is ready. We will process whether you give us an order."
Said one of my female officers.
'It's too late. I can't hesitate now. '
I thought. Feeling the determination of my archers.
Rising my hand and giving them the signal.
"Fire!"
The cloud of arrows flew in the direction of the human army.
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This is my work of fiction. Names, characters, and events are the products of my complete imagination. This story is created for entertainment and any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or events is purely coincidental. So please read a plot as being totally fictional.
Author notes: English isn’t my first language, so sorry for any misspellings or grammar mistakes. The only thing I can say is that I will try to get better at it. So please go easy on me, guys.
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First and foremost, the author gives a notice in the description that English is not their first language before promptly apologizing in advance for any mistakes and frankly, the warning was not needed. In summary, it is much too early to give anything concrete about this novel, all I can say is so far it is interesting. For the most part, as a native English speaker, I can say that the author has an excellent vocabulary coupled with proper grammar and punctuation skills. There are a few mundane mistakes here and there that honestly anyone could make and they can be fixed simply by rereading the chapter before posting to make doubly sure there aren't any errors. Over all, so far, I can recommend this!