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La historia es buena, pero la gramática casi no se entiende Pon mas esfuerzo :) Puedes hacerlo mucho mejor Tu puedes :) Y que se mas largo cada capitulo
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I hope the author can continue the story as so far it was amazing! Sooooo CHAPTEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRESSSSSSS! MOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEE CHAPTERRRRRS! Sorry had to get my point across
hello I'm the author of this book so I'm going to be a little biased towards my own book. I'm trying to make a kingdom building book but with a little twist. in till I get the first 10 chapters out I'm not going to add a synopsis because it will just spoil the plot. also if anyone has any cool ideas or thinks I should add anything to the story I always take suggestions. it would be like we as a community are writing a novel together. I'm always reading comments.
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La historia es buena, pero la gramática casi no se entiende Pon mas esfuerzo :) Puedes hacerlo mucho mejor Tu puedes :) Y que se mas largo cada capitulo
Reveal Spoiler I hope the author can continue the story as so far it was amazing! Sooooo CHAPTEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRESSSSSSS! MOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEE CHAPTERRRRRS! Sorry had to get my point across
hello I'm the author of this book so I'm going to be a little biased towards my own book. I'm trying to make a kingdom building book but with a little twist. in till I get the first 10 chapters out I'm not going to add a synopsis because it will just spoil the plot. also if anyone has any cool ideas or thinks I should add anything to the story I always take suggestions. it would be like we as a community are writing a novel together. I'm always reading comments.
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