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Shiro is your typical high school student living a boring life in a boring world but everything is going to change
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So far, the story doesn't seem that overall bad. The storytelling isn't the best and needs to be improved though. From what I remember from the story, I'm pretty sure you haven't really introduced your character all that much yet. The story development isn't all that bad, I'd say that it's just fine. The world background from what I see it is not really all to well, but I can see that it's not the worst. You've only posted one chapter so far so it's kind hard to review the stability of updates, so yeah- I apologize if I'm completely wrong about this book, there is only one chapter so far after all. I believe that this book has potential though!
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