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It all started with an innocent bet made during childhood.
Nobody could ever guess what it would led to.
Not jing not wang..
Do not read this.
I am going to rewrite it again.
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I am trying to delete all the chapters and to rewrite them. so atleast for the time being do not read this. The upgraded chapter will have *
My lord... The plot totally could go places.😃fillllllllllllllllllllllllllleerfillllllllllllllllllllllllllleerfillllllllllllllllllllllllllleerfillllllllllllllllllllllllllleerfillllllllllllllllllllllllllleer
The horrible grammar and misspelling in the title accurately reflect the rest of the novel. I would recommend that the author use a spelling and grammar checking program. I would also recommend the removal of this novel.
This is... really bad, even for a rough draft. Not talking just about the grammar either. It really is as bad as it sounds or maybe worse than I'm describing.
Thanks for pointing out the problems. I do know where grammar is wrong. But, I never tried to focus on the grammar. Thought that as long as it is readable, it is ok. Yes, I admit I was wrong. And I will try to improve my English writing skills. Hopefully, next time I post a chapter there will be improvement. Thanks for everything. But really I am cynical, no doubt there. And if there is any problem in grammar and sentence stucture in this comment, let me know.